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Sweeeeet. Although I had hoped they would catch up to Aragorn and give him his just desserts. ;)

That b**stard! I knew we couldn't trust him! First poor Haldir, and now THIS! I hope he meets an especially gruesome end!

Big apology! Sorry ladies if I cannot review as frequently as I normaly woudl, but I have some urgent family business to take care of at the moment and won't be around on a regular basis for a while on either the adultff.net or the MB. But please do not let that discourage you, after all there are many others who are reading and loving your stories even if they may not always come out into the open to say so. I will try and read your updates whenever I can and try to be back in touch with you as soon as I can, but right now, RL has completely taken over, I am afraid.

Take care and hope to be able to talk to you again really soon!

A. aka Ranger Ran

That chapter reminded me of the little "fun and games" talk we had a few days ago. ;) Minuial is certainly a strong OFC in this story and it will be interesting to see where this whole cat and mice game is heading. Her talk with Haldir was certainly enlightening regarding her plans for that date with Faramir AND the ring. So far for the "peace mission"! This is one of those "nothing is at it seems" stories, I think. Though Aragorn may have told the elves in the first story what happend to Minuial sister, we still have a feeling the truth may not be as simple as that. We'll see... Looking forward to more and have a nice Sunday!

Nononono, Elven mustn't "pull a Doby", Elven is NOT a house elf after all, lol! Elven must see, these are DIFFERENT elves, OK?

Minuial: HA! I KNEW she was the sister of that first messenger to Gondor! You cannot fool me, I knew it when Galadriel said: "We need to tell her." at the end of the first chapter!"

OK, two things:

First, can I please give Aragorn a hug, he is SO sad in this one. *sigh* I love the way you portray him... And regarding Arwen: Who said, blondes are the stupid ones? Marrying "Mirkwoodman"! I mean, seriously, sheesh! *gives Arwen the look*

Second, can I PLEASE wack Haldir over the head with one of the paddles, simply because he is behaving like a complete dickhead (can I say dickhead on adultfanfic.net *g*?). Thank you!

I would assume that this will be one of your longer stories, right? I would guess around ten to twelve chapters at least, possibly longer? Just a feeling, I may be completly wrong.

Greedy for more as always! CU! :)

Big hug to both of you,

A.

Totally forgot this:

I LOVED the way Minuial got back at Haldir for watching her in the river. You go 'n' grab him by his crown jewels, girl! :D

OK, I have to add a few things here, since I had only read the summary when I first posted:

This is a FANTASTIC start into a story, the setup it seems is quite different from anything you have done before. I also find it very carefully written with attention to detail (such as the falling leaf in firsfirst passage, the stream compared to the soft touch of a lover, very nice), which to me make a story so much more vivid. Please keep that up, it certainly works.

I like how you presented Aragorn so far. This story is, of course, AU. Yet I find Aragorn to be very much in character, there is a gentility and a nobility there, that is very much like AragAragorn we know and love.