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for A Fleeting Glimpse of Shadow

by Oropher

person DreadLadyFreya
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, Friend! Thanks for clawing through the fog to deliver this offering. I, too, hope you’re on the upswing!

Love your characterization of Gil-Galad & Oropher, they bicker like an old married couple. (of course after 20,000 years together who wouldn’t? *lol*) Can’t wait ‘til Michael realizes WHY that dimple nags at him so.

This is where my evil twin Frieda and I disagree (quite vehemently). I want you to take it easy, get plenty of rest and not relapse. The evil one wants you to get your fanny back in front of the ‘puter and start writing, we NEED to know what happens to Michael, does he get to leave the Halls? What’s going on back in the world of the living? How are Legolas and Faramir taking his loss? (That evil twin sure is a curious one…) Do what you think is best, I’ll make sure Frieda behaves until your next update. Wait a sec, that’s right, I’M the evil twin. mwahaha
person CJ
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Any chance you'll be updating soon? I've been checking this site like one of Pavlov's dogs waiting for the next chapter. Well done, well written and I'm beginning to see the reason's for Michael's participation in all of this. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next installment.
person deathskiss
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! This story gets better with each chapter. I can't bear to think of what's happened to Michael (or the others, for that matter). Please don't leave us all hanging for too long!
person Vi Janaway
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~~~~oh no~~~~~
You have such a way with telling a tale...
But it is too cold right now...
Poor Gimli turning himself inside out.
I really like that everyone pulls his/her weight...no damsels in destress in this one.
person Dread Lady Freya
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No… Michael… Poor Frances – yes, Frances. Michael’s pain is over, but Frances’ is JUST beginning. He never took the chance to say he loved him. Please tell us you’ve got something up your sleeve, please? Michael’s not going to stay dead, is he? Legolas’ll plead Michael’s case to his lord, right?
person MarzBar
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the new installment. Michael is/was certainly a brave little guy, especially since he hadn't a clue about what was going on around him. Will his spirit stay with Faramir? Looking forward to more.
person Thalionwen
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely riveting and poignant chapter!. I am stunned. Bravo..
person MarzBar
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story after the "Pottymouth" tale. I am fascinated by this universe, hope there will be more to this story and another one as well.
person Vi Janaway
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. How very sad...and mournful...
But, choices...and sacrifices...are often required...
Very good.
person Thalionwen
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better!!. I am absolutely *enthralled* by it.. :) Glad to hear your meds have evened-out and that you feel a bit more like yourself!. Many blessings...