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for A Fleeting Glimpse of Shadow

by Oropher

person MarzBar
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're feeling somewhat better. I was so happy to find more of this story today. I love your "Pottymouth" universe. You are a wonderful wrirer and your muse must love you a lot.
person deathskiss
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad to hear you are feeling better. And so glad to see this new chapter when I logged in today! It was beautifully written, and well worth the wait. I loved the 'cameos' by Legolas' parents. Can't wait to see how this all turns out!
person CJ
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah... I honestly can't imagine why Gilgalad and Oropher have been (Om not sure if the word is condemned, sentenced or assigned) placed in purgatory, other than to possibly work out theri differences before moving on. It did make for some seriously funny dialog, especially for anyone who has read the lengthy ans somewhat repetitive-in-theme Sillmarillion.

Can't wait for the next installment and hope you're feeling well. Cookies for the writer :-)
person deathskiss
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! I loved how you wrote Gil-Galad and Oropher in this chapter; poor Michael can't even get a break in the afterlife. I look forward to the next chapter; they've definity been worth the wait!
person ViJanaway
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am ALWAYS surprised by this...most pleasantly so...Poor Michael....couldn't get a word in edgewise...I like your Thranduil
Just keep on getting better.
person Dread Lady Freya
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back - again! Even a ‘temporary’ clean bill of health is appreciated! Normally I’d say something noble like, “Don’t be silly, your continued good health is all we need.” But updates are a currency I will GLADLY accept! *vbg*

I know I said this before, but I just can’t get over the image I have of Gil-Galad & Orophin bickering like an old married couple. Not being able to say two sentences to each other without starting an argument! *snicker*

I REALLY like your interpretation of Thranduil. So many authors write him as an over bearing, arrogant, condescending so and so, I like envisioning the softer side of him. “…he had accepted Michael as a cherished child, with no question or any stinting of protective affection. He didn't need to ask; he didn't need to question; this man loved him ….” *heavy sigh* Ah, that we could each find that kind of acceptance within our own family circles.

Can’t wait to see everyone’s reaction to Michael’s return!
person MarzBar
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you're back! I still love this story and the latest addiition is so "out there" I am once again panting for more. Hope things are better for you now.
person Dragoneyez
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must admit I do like Oropher and Gil-Galad... *giggle* Poor guys. Having to put up with each other for thousands of years must be really boring. And I do love Michael's reactions to it all - throughout the entire story.

I'm waiting with anticipation for the next chapter.
person deathskiss
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you back! Fantastic chapter; I cannot wait to see how this ends!
person MarzBar
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the latest. Love the Hall of Mandos and Michael's new friends. I love this universe. Legolas being so crude and Arwen loving to blow up things is just too cool. Been waiting for this chapter and will continue to look (probably every day) for more. Great writing.