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Thank you, thank you, thank you... I've had a hellish day in the middle of a hellish week and I really reeeeeeaaaaallly needed something fun to read when I came home.

Even a chapter as somber as this one. Go Michael!

Thank you so much for the new chapter!! Michael has become the Hunter now; will he be able to kill Ahn? This story is so exciting. More soon please.

I can't remember how I discovered this story, but every new chapter you post is now a huge treat. Don't worry about keeping us waiting: as long as the next chapter does come, in the end, I'll be happy. I adore the way you depict Faramir and I've grown to love Michael, and while I wasn't sure about "your" Legolas to start with, I'm a huge fan now. I know I have to leave the story in your hands but can't help hoping that Legolas is going to get his sight back and soon.

whoa! What a grand row! Just my opinion...I think Legolas was a little hard on Aragorn...but, I guess after so many years they would be able to say anything to each other...and tempers do run hight when a beloved friend is injured or in danger.
Michael is still not coompletely comfortable with what has happened...but, all things considered, he and Legolas are holding up well.
Very good chapter.

Teeheehee!! This chapter is full of giggles! The dysfunctional family having at it. Have a good vacation; we'll be waiting for more.

Two chappies in one week? Yippee! *clears throat* As I was saying ... Had to laugh, despite the serious mood, at Faramir's "I'm-upset-but-I-don't-want-to-show-it and oh-my-god-I-can't-believe-he-doesn't-get-it" look. And here I thought women had exclusive rights to that one! *lol* It nearly broke my heart when we discovered that Faramir was worried about what Boromir would've thougth of his relationship with Michael. "'I love you,' said Faramir. It wasn't a declaration of devotion; it was a confession made to a priest, an excuse for his self-loathing." So sad to consider how long he'd been living with that kind of guilt, and an interesting insight into what has been driving him. And at last he knows Michael loves him. *vbg*

*Sigh*

Ah, thank you. Two, count 'em, two chapters within a short space. I actually think that of all of the motley crew the Undying, Michael just might be the most well-adjusted. Love the scene in Faramir's room and Michael's thought processes. Especially loved the bit about redecorating Boromir's living room. Hee!

Hang in there. Am eagerly awaiting the next installment, just make sure you're healthy.

CJ

Good, Michael is all the way back now. Love how he still thinks Legolas is an alien! And how is Legolas doing after his fight with some of the Valar! Our beautiful Prince should be rewarded, not punished. Waiting for more.

Hey! I've just caught up with this fantastic story after having read the most excellent Pottymouth on scribeoz.Two happy evenings reading and then you update the next day. Wonderful! Love the way you're developing the stoy and the characters in this chapter Boromir'd "be too impressed with how well you sail and program computers and kill people, and then I'd redecorate his dining room and everything would be fine." Yes!

Hope you're feeling good and that you're health is improving. And (selfishly) that you've got the space and inspiration to keep going the way you are with this. All best,
Eirwen

How many more ways are you going to put Legolas through a wringer?????????? I do hope that his rewards are going to worth all his pain and suffering. You do spin a wild, very well-done tale. :) :) :)