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for A Fleeting Glimpse of Shadow

by Oropher

person MarzBar
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!! Pippin is the cabbie!! Loved this chapter. More soon please.
person Drew
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweet mother of pearl, that was a great chapter! My favourite part? "...he was in no mood to be either bullied or condescended to, especially by someone who (a) arrived late, and (b) started spouting orders..." That part made me laugh out loud. And I love the cabbie; I won't say who, just in case some one reads reviews before chapters, but it's about time! I've been wondering where he was.

Excellent work, you totally made my day! Cheers!
person Drew
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops! I read this the day it was posted and never reviewed.

Wow, go Micheal! He's certainly come a long way in a very short time. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
person Vi Janaway
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry that I missed reviewing the last four chapters. REAL LIFE.......
Sometimes, I get so angry with the Chosen....and all the circcumstances...then, I remember that they are involved in urgent work. They are risk-takers...and get their marching orders from a higher plane.
I do hope Legolas gets better...and I just can't grasp that Faramir and Gimli are NOT dead. Michael has proved a very inteesting character.
person Dread Lady Freya
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! All right Michael! He had me worried there for a moment or two, thought his Softer Side might assert itself and let Ahn go. I should never have doubted him. Oh, will he be surprised when he finds out Faramir & Gimli aren't dead for long.
person MarzBar
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will our Dreamer kill the vile Ahn? Will Legolas regain his sight? And are Faramir and Gimli unkillable, too? More soon please.
person Jasmine
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last chaper (39) Michael has come a long way from the beginning. I love the way you have pulled him along

can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks so much for writting the Pottymouth universe

Jasmine
person Drew
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! You're well! Life is good.

I love Michael's Vala; Tulkas has always been one of my favourites. *grin* I thought it might be him, and yes, I can imagine him sounding like Eomer, too.

And what a horribly evil place to end the chapter! I've been checking every day since you posted, hoping you'll surprise us with another update. I'll keep checking, you keep writing, and everything will be hunky-dory.

Love, hugs and chocolate!

Impatiently being patient,
Drew
person Dread Lady Freya
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!! How can you leave us there??? I mean welcome back, glad you're feeling better and all, but. . . How can you leave us hanging there like that? US! Your beloved, loyal, patient readers?
person Thalionwen
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you're back!. And with such a masterfully-written chapter too... Waiting for the next one with baited breath. You sure have a knack for leaving us with amazing cliffhangers!!! :)