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for A Fleeting Glimpse of Shadow

by Oropher

person deathskiss
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this is almost over! :( Wonderful as always, though!
person kittynip9
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And what? The future flashes before him, decades have passed and now he's dead? That can't be the end. Please don't tell me that's the end!
person MarzBar
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was that the final chapter? It was a good one. If you write more Pottymouth, I will read it happily. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
person Vi Janaway
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite an adventure...I am so impressed with the way you worked everyone into a very merry tale of intrigue, angst, and just fun.
person Drew
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! ....I don't really have words. What a great chapter. I love the little cameo in France. Somehow, I never pictured Diamond like that, but it suits her well.

I'm so glad everything worked out, but I'm sorry that the story is concluded. What will I read now? Are you planning any more stories in this universe? Stay well and keep writing!
person Ling
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs a happy sigh*

Lovely, I'm exhausted having just received your email around 1 AM and just finishing now. I love it. I promise a meatier review later. I missed this world, ever so much.
person deathskiss
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I've been away for awhile, and it took me some time to catch up, but it was so worth the effort!
person CJ
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering why we hadn't seen much of the Hobbits in all of this... of course, they're generally peace-loving sorts, so I can see why the'd be better suited to electronic monitoring and surveillance than picking off bad guys. Love Pip as a London Cabbie. Of course, I can see the actor that played him in the movies as a London cabbie as well, so there you go...

Thanks for the update - work and school have been hell and a well-written update, as well as an appearance by my favorite troublemaker, has lifted the old spirits greatly. Looking forward to the next installment. :-)

CJ
person Dread Lady Freya
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Michael’s grief was … ‘absolutely heart wrenching’ is all I can come up with, but it just doesn’t seem adequate. You had me crying for him, even though I knew Faramir wasn’t really dead (as Miracle Max once said, “He’s only mostly dead” ). The valar comforting him in his grief was touching, especially his vision of Nienna crying with (or for) him.

What a surprise to see Pippin! I knew there was something unusual about the cabbie when he didn’t run screaming off in to the night, but I had no idea it was Pippin. Who else do you have up your sleeve? *grins*
person Vi Janaway
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Goodness.......You just keep coming up with more and more surprises. good ones. Your stories are definite keepers.