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Oh, Gods! what an INCREDIBLE chapter... I am absolutely enthralled by your story!

I’m reminded of the scene in Blazing Saddles when the sheriff is heading out to ‘deal’ with Mongo. As he straps on his six-shooter, the Waco Kid warns him, “Don’t do that. If you shoot him, you’ll just make him angry.” Someone should’ve warned the Major-General that shooting Legs wouldt mat make him angry!

Poor Michael, I don’t even want to think about how he’s gonna react to this newest plot twist. His little mind may just shut down. We’ll have put him in a nice warm room with padded wallpaper and one of those nice jackets with the wrap-around sleeves. Frances will be able to visit every Tuesday afternoon and spoon-feed him jello…

I must admit I was thrilled (but not surprised) at Frances’ admission, “‘…if something happens to him I'll have precious little to live for.’” I definitely like this version of Faramir, thank you for making him a kinder, gentler Francis!

I have to tell you... I am completely hooked by your alternative universe!. The very thought of Tolkien's revered characters presented as a 'Mission Impossible' type of organization would be laughable, if it were not so masterfully done. You are amazing!!! and I await the next update eagerly.

eee eee eee yikes!!!!!
Can you be a bit more graphic?
Wow. An edge of my seat chapter.

NOOOOO!! Not again! What is it with you and killing off our dear Legs? Just when we thought poor Michael was in for a "Fate Worse than Death," in comes Legs kicking butt & not bothering to take names, only to be snuffed out by some toy soldier wannabe. It's a good thing I like rollercoasters - even the emotional ones! But Legs will survive this, right? After all, what's having half one's head blown off to an Imortal, right? Right?

No!!! you killed legs agian Eowyn is going to be so piss off, please up date soon you are killing me with this.

I never got round to saying how much I loved pottymouth I have it printed out and have read it 3 times, so please keep writing I need more.

Not again!!!! Oh the utter angst of it. I sit here at 2:30 in the morning, and you've killed Legolas...again!!! *sob* I don't think I can surrive another "Pottymouth"...or worse. Seriously, I hope you update soon, because I love your writing, but my poor little heart is broken!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Holy.. something. I must admit that each chapter has made me sit more and more at the very edge of the c - a - and the ending of this one truely made me fall off. Please continue - the explanations from Michael's innocent point of view gives the entire story a slightly errie quality that truely displays just how much the Chosen differ from ordinary people. That, and then that the story is truely a lot darker than what you have shown of this universe previously.

Oh, christ! I am at a loss for words. This is just another dream, right?

Please don't us us hanging on too long- update soon!