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for Of Elbereth's Bounty

by AStrayn

person HHS
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that they came to terms about their lingering(not anymore)feelings for each other.Holding them back won't do any good for eithert of them.
person Karen
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! I am following this story with great interest. I have always enjoyed your writing. Keep up the great work!
person Twilight
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad others were appreciative of the special skills of Echoriath and wanted to help in his orchards. Though I do wonder if Echoriath went travelling, who would take care of his orchard. I really adore Echoriath, and am quite impressed that he can summon the rain at will.

Very interesting discussion between Legolas and Glorfindel about the concerns and difficulties in the begetting of Elladan's sons. Echoriath has known that he has been in love with Tathren for a long time. Tathren does not know if it is lust or love yet, even if he does care for him.






person Sian
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"sigh"damndamn, I am so in love with these characters. So richly lovely, I cannot gush enough, wonderful!
person Twilight
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading the third part of your story, which focuses more about Echoriath and his love for his cousin. I'm glad Tathren has opened his eyes to Echoriath's outer beauty beside knowing about his loving and generous heart.
person HHS
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why does love have to be so complicated???
person Sian
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so very pleased to see this wonderful tale continue. I had thought I would never find an author whose words were as lovely as my favorite, Eresse. But your are. I am going back now to reread the first two stories, just to refresh my memory. Oh, and let me add, I adore Echoriath.
person keekercatt
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This tale has been well worth the wait! In just the first chapter, so many things are set up, I can't wait for more! The relationship between the twins is beautiful, as well as the young ones with their respective Ada. I also adore Echoriath. It seems he will be the focus, and I'm glad. It also seems that Tathren will be *his* focus? I hope so! They aren't any more closely related than Aragorn and Arwen in a "blood" sense. So where does star-crossed come into it? Will have to read your frequent ;) updates to find out. Normally, I don't read anything with OC's as the focus, but these aren't OC's....these are the sons of my favorite Elves.
*giggling madl the the thought of Legolas losing his composure and missing the shot*
Thank you so much for this!