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for Of Elbereth's Bounty

by AStrayn

person Jaylen
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gloromeien,
I don't think I have reviewed for you before this, but I had to let you know how much I am enjoying your series. I have been reading the series (all of them) since you first started them. They have really developed as you have gone along. The characters have grown so realistically through the ages. I loved the way Legolas always took everything Elrohir told him to heart. Then, poof, suddenly Legolas is grown up and taking charge. The change was great. I think character development and change is such an intrinsic part of a well written story. Your stories character development has a subtlety to it. You don't notice the changes until you look back. As a reader I watched Legolas grow and now I am watching his son grow into man or elfhood. The progression is enthralling. I think that is what makes your stories so good. Of course the humor, emotion, sex and cute comebacks don't hurt. (The part in the first series where Elrohir didn't recognize Legolas but Elladan did is one of my favorites.)

Part 12 was wonderful with Tathren discovering his little brothers - what a surprise! I was dying to know who tunuviel was. It was cute the way Tathren tried to bribe the triplets. Then came Tunuviel!! What an adjustment for Tathren, I'm suprised he took it so well. But it just goes to show how well and loved he was raised.

I also have to say I love how long your chapters are!! It is great to sit down and read several pages instead of 2 or 3. And now TWO chapters!!!! I am in reading heaven. Thank you for sharing your imagination and creativity with us.
Jaylen
person Twilight
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The tale of the adventurers' travels and trials over the eight years was nicely encapsulated in this chapter.

At first, the disorderly state of the garden and the removal of the weapons at Elrohir and Legolas' home was worrisome if some possible tragedy had occurred. What a big and welcome surprise to read about the triplets. What a triple handful! Also, what a fitting and thoughtful tribute to Glorfindel by Echo in patterning the new colony on Gondolin and wishing to name it as such.

Some more surprises in store for Tathren and we, the readers at the feast. Can not wait to read more.
person Deathangelgw
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude...it took me three days to read three chapters, but that's how involved I was in it! The sorrow and heartache of the first addition just made me sob, the bittersweet reunion of the second chapter made me bite my lip in hope....and the third put me back into wailing for more! WAH!

I do hope that something might work out for Elrohir and Legolas, because I think they NEED another kidlet/grandkidlet. But, if they don't, I do so hope Talion finds someone! His story is so sad now! He reminds me of...me! Wah! Don't want that!

More soon!

Love, DA
person Karen
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you wrote more, I checked everyday for updates, now I have 3 chapters on a row. Thank you!!!
person Twilight
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just as I was wondering what happened to this story, a new update showed up. Glad to have you back and with a three chapter update too! It was interesting to read about the varied reactions by the different parents concerning the relationship by Tathren and Echoriath. The reaction of betrayal especially felt by Elrohir was particularly interesting to read about, and the fears that he had about losing his closeness with Tathren.

Fascinating prophecy about Tathren being the chosen one, and also, that it was not Echoriath with his fabulous gifts. I look forward to reading about their adventuring, especially though neophyte Echoriath's eyes. Lovely wonderful story!
person Anoriell
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ever have you captivated me with your tale-spinning... this story is no exception as a testament to your immeasurable talent. In chapter 8, you left us trembling with emotion; I'm sure that I am not the only reader who anxiously awaits the continuation of this wonderful story. I sincerely hope that all is well with you... I know how life can get hectic at times. I do pray that the telling of this particular tale still inspires you; I truly miss your characters... you've depicted them with such in-depth personalities and richness of soul. I look forward to the continuation of their adventures...

Thank you for sharing your writing with the rest of us.

Anoriell
person MR
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing!!!
Great story.
person Deathangelgw
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just had to let you know that I had read 'Earendil's Light' a long way back and then when I saw that there were sequels, I literally SQUEALED in delight! This tale has me captivated (I should know, I read it straight through and stayed up till 7 in the morning to read it!) and I can't WAIT for more! I feel the most attracted to Echoriath...I think he is just adorable and I know several times my heart clenched with his pain! And Tathren is wonderfully supportive and loving as well! Cuthalion I can't wait to see how you'll allow him to grow as it goes and the parents.......oooooooooh I hope they are accepting!!! *bounces in wait* More soon please!!!
person MR
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what a wonderful story. All the characters are so very real. Keep going. I'm dieing to know what will happen now that Legolas knows. I understand that they grew up as cousins, but they are not related in blood and its not as though they could have children with each other. I also wanna know about the little baby (brother or sister?) I think a sister would shake thinks up with all those guys. But whatever... Great story. Keep going. ;)
person cami
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an amazingly good, richly textured, plot filled story. Well written and filled to the brim with slashy goodness *g.* Not only do I like, Tathren, Echoriath and Culthalion. I so much look forward to what will happen to them next. Legolas has figured out what's going on, I look forward to finding out how Elrohir reacts, and how the other adars react when they find out, and who will they find out from, all of this is so very interesting. I'm also looking forward to Legolas and Elrohir having an addtion to the family. I hope you update soon.