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This is hilarious! I hope you haven't given up on this! It's so good so far! However, do you know where I could find the original fic? The original author has taken all her fics off of fanfiction.net. Do you know where I could find it? Please update soon! Can't wait for more!

Hi! I've just got to tell you that I think this parody is not only *inspired,* but it is also long overdue. There's *so* much bad Lord of the Rings fanfiction out there that at times it boggles my mind and it's about time that someone made fun of it. Of course, other people might have, but your fic is the only one I've seen. Thank you so much, and I hope to see more of this soon.

~Lila~

Cunt!

as much as i did like this story when i read it your MST is pretty funny ^^!

Hey, SugaryLime. This is kinda weird for me because most of the people who know about this story think I should be really, really pissed at you. Which I was, for a while But honestly I've decided that if you feel compelled to trash my stories, go for it. The thing is, I have enough of a sense of humor that if you'd asked, I probably would have said yes.

Oh well. I guess all I really have to say is that if you want to parody another one of my stories...don't.

Ok, I feel really bad for the author of the original story, but... this thing has had me in stitches!!! It's hilarious! Mean, but in an extremely cleverly funny way. I do have to say that the original story was incredibly too sappy. My teeth rotted out from just readding the sacharine sweetness.

In the end, mean, but funny. I think it balances.

Well, this was in poor taste. Your parody skills leave to be desired. Really, the original Miracle Flutters was much more enjoyable. But hey! Whatever floats your boat. As long as you realize you're making a total fool of yourself by MSTing a well-known and well-loved fic?

ROFLMAO!! I cant believe this hasnt gotten more reviews, its fucking hilarious!! I cant wait to read more!

Sorry this was so bad and pointless but hey it's your fic to be proud of I love Mst/humor fic's as long as the writer knoboutbout it , if they don't then I concider it stealing someone else work for your own use. Nice work champ..wonder how to report this since you did not get premission to use this story...

I like MSTs ^.^ This one is pretty darn funny. As a general rule I'm not overly fond of MSTs w/ unoriginal characters because they wind up so pointlessly OOC and don't really add anything, and take away any any suspention of disbelief that you might possibly have (not that SoD is important in this sorta thing, but you get the idea), BUT I like the way you used Legolas and Aregorn (crap, did I spell that right?) in this. They actually added something to the humor. Imagine that. ^.^; Anyway, the character thing is probably just a preference of mine I developed reg tog too many of my friend's fics. ^.^;

One thing I would recommend is to interupt the story more frequently that once every other paragraph. Like the part where you give a list of things that are screwed up about what you just read would go more smoothly if you had just said whatever was fucked up right after it was written. Like as soon as the author uses that screwy word you said sounded like a car you should have broken away from the fic to comment about it sounding like car, even if it meant cutting the fic up at mid-sentance. That way it doesn't feel like the reader is actually reading the original fic at all, 'cause it is in digestable pieces, in addition to your jokes going off more easily because there is immediate connection and it isn't nessisary to go back and hunt through what the reader just, most likely, skimmed in order to find the line or word you are referring to.

Then again, that my also be a preferrence of mine I got from my friend's perticular style of MSTing. ^.^; I'm not really much of a writter myself, so I can't say.