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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have been following this story for a while and do wish that you would continue this line. Usually, like some one else, I don't get the man on man thing, but those 3 are just to die for!!!! please update soon.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
usually I don't read the guy things, but craig is my favorite one! hope you continue this one, too bad the one with him and the cake isn't continued!!!!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marton and Craig (or Celeborn and Haldir) is my favourite pairing and this story is just so hot!
Could we please have the next part soon? Marton really should get his hearts' desire. Please!
Could we please have the next part soon? Marton really should get his hearts' desire. Please!
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaarrghhhhh!!!! After a long wait, only having to wait some more! You are really evil, ending chappy 3 at the middle of the best part. Please post soon. THANKS.
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had meant to leave a review after the first chapter, but I was in a rush and didn't have time.
You've certainly got a good start to this story. I've been watching for the update since the first chapter was posted and now I'm very ready for the *next* chapter to this story.
Karl and Marton deserved to be caught. Karl wasn't acting like much of a friend, no matter what his excuses were.
If you're not using a beta already, I'll volunteer. I do some beta work for a couple of others (no RPS yet, but I'm willing to get it a shot). Drop me an email if you'd like for me to take a look. I've read several of your other stories. In general, I'd say you're a good writer. You have a good grasp of what you want to accomplish with your fics. Your plots are interesting. I'd say that your weakness is in developing your characters'tiontions and thoughts. In this chapter, for instance, we got only a glimpse of how Craig really felt about what he had seen. Karl and Marton didn't seem overly concerned with how Craig was feeling about it all. I'm sure you *meant* for them to have feelings on the matter; it just didn't *seem* that way. LOL As the saying goes, the devil is in the details.
You've certainly got a good start to this story. I've been watching for the update since the first chapter was posted and now I'm very ready for the *next* chapter to this story.
Karl and Marton deserved to be caught. Karl wasn't acting like much of a friend, no matter what his excuses were.
If you're not using a beta already, I'll volunteer. I do some beta work for a couple of others (no RPS yet, but I'm willing to get it a shot). Drop me an email if you'd like for me to take a look. I've read several of your other stories. In general, I'd say you're a good writer. You have a good grasp of what you want to accomplish with your fics. Your plots are interesting. I'd say that your weakness is in developing your characters'tiontions and thoughts. In this chapter, for instance, we got only a glimpse of how Craig really felt about what he had seen. Karl and Marton didn't seem overly concerned with how Craig was feeling about it all. I'm sure you *meant* for them to have feelings on the matter; it just didn't *seem* that way. LOL As the saying goes, the devil is in the details.
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't know about other people, but I really like your writing! I love the story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please write it quick! I'm anxious to see what will happen! PLEASE!