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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that if I had to CPR someone then it would be straight to be hospital for them! However, nice story and yummy sex scene!!!!!
Hugs Binky x x x
Hugs Binky x x x
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...I honestly don't know what to make of this story; but I have never given a bad review and am not going to start now. So, constructive criticism? The plotline at this juncture is a little sketchy- Orli's obviously ailing in some way, the gang finds it necessary to take him to the hospital and yet Viggo takes him to his house? _What?_ Orli's suddenly affectionate towards him- very sexual in nature...
Could just be my opinion, but some story developing is in need. Once that is done this story could be very good indeed.
Sorry for the criticism,
Asyen
Could just be my opinion, but some story developing is in need. Once that is done this story could be very good indeed.
Sorry for the criticism,
Asyen
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kind of confusing, but i guess it'll be explained later
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kind of confusing, but i guess it'll be explained later
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....
All I can think of for the moment..
Really good...
Please update again soon
All I can think of for the moment..
Really good...
Please update again soon
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! Orlando is gonna die!
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I-Ah-Wha-Bu-He-Uh--UGH! THAT CAN'T BE IT!!!!! OH MY GOD! YOU HAVE TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! PLEASE! I love it so far!go/Ogo/Orli..*ahh* One of my favorite pairings....PLEASE CONTINUE!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome Update Soon!!!!!