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by zhie

person mirasaui
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haldir, all this trouble at his expense. I hope he enjoys himself immensely--lol! Look forward to more.
person None
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't waitsee see what happens next! Beautifully done. Though if I may guess, I would wager that the maiden was touching the tip of Haldir's ear, nay? But we'll jsut have to see. =-)
person Mirasaui
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story--what a riot! I am sitting at my computer (LMAO). Please write more soon.
person Werecat (too bored to log in)
schedule April 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked the meeting of Haldir and the hobbitspecipecially the part where he could not remember them.

As for Glorfindel decorating Imladris, that was hilarious.

The scene between Haldir and Elrond was very beautiful, almost tender.

And I liked the additional wager between the two brothers. It adds spice.

Overall, a very enjoyable story.
person zhie
schedule April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks everyone who has been reading the story! Maggie and I have been thrilled with the response. Merenwenfefalas, we definately plan to see this story through to the end (in fact, we've got the last four chapters done, now we just have to get from point A to point B, so to speak). kiki, we're not revealing who it is in his dreams until the very end - so, until that time, you can pretend it's whoever you want ;) Lady of Legolas, there is no such thing as too much Haldir smut, is there? heh heh. Mainframe - wow! mega comments! woohoo! Elrond sure is hiding out in Gondor, but I don't know how long he'll be able to fend off the inlaws. As for dialog, we will literally sit for hours role playing the characters back and forth while we jot down notes. At my place, at Mags' place, in the car, at work, over the phone, while we're shopping, and anywhere else the elf muses stalk us. Tis great fun - our conversations are probably more amusing than the stories themselves. Bungie...um...Haldir/Gimli...I'll think about it...Werecat, yeah, we're a little pal tol to having lots of elves around, as you noticed, glad you're liking the story so far! I've sent a note both to you and Lady Legolas that it's been updated, so enjoy! Chapter Five isn't as funny as the last chapter, but it needed to be written to move the plot along.

-Zhie
person Isa
schedule April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so impossibly funny!
And this was one of it's best chapters.
Go on!
person Lady of Legolas
schedule April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ai!More please!!!
person Lady of Legolas
schedule March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Any chance of an update ie nee near future?Please?
person Lady of Legolas
schedule March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I seriously want to know who's going to win the bet.More to read please!!!
person Werecat (too bored to log in)
schedule March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is onr HELL of a story. I just love it so far, and I'll be waiting to read more. If it's not much trouble, send me a note when you update :)