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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats freaky, kool but freaky
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lydia, WOW!! This is a different kind of story but it sure does work. I liked it a lot. Am off to read more of your work.
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to cry. It's so sad. How very depressing. It was an interesting piece though. Not bad, just, well, sad. I like happy endings. But, you're talented, and I understand about the whole muse thing, (what a demanding bitch she can be.) So, sad, but good.
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic; very dark like pretty much all of your others. A few things about it though.
1. If this happened it would be much more believable with Johnny and Orlando reversed.
After all JD has led a semi dangerous life where rape could have happened to him and gone practically unnoticed.
2. I can not picture Johnny being stronger and taller than Orlando it's just to hard.
3. Come on the guy who played Edward Scissorhands a rapist?
I did how ever like a lot of the meanings in it. Like we should go with our instinct and not be afraid to be wrong.
1. If this happened it would be much more believable with Johnny and Orlando reversed.
After all JD has led a semi dangerous life where rape could have happened to him and gone practically unnoticed.
2. I can not picture Johnny being stronger and taller than Orlando it's just to hard.
3. Come on the guy who played Edward Scissorhands a rapist?
I did how ever like a lot of the meanings in it. Like we should go with our instinct and not be afraid to be wrong.
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't really say that I did NOT like it. Can't really say that I enjoyed it either; but I'm not a huge fan of darkfic to begin with so that could be the reason there. *S*
I liked the format. We spend so much time simply in dialogue, throwing words about. The lack of actions made it seem a bit rushed, but things can go from "good" to "ok" to "bad" to "tragic" in the blink of an eye so all in all the pace works for the plot.
I liked the format. We spend so much time simply in dialogue, throwing words about. The lack of actions made it seem a bit rushed, but things can go from "good" to "ok" to "bad" to "tragic" in the blink of an eye so all in all the pace works for the plot.