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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, although it's obvious that you need a beta reader to check your spelling and grammar. I like the way you picture the interaction between characters and you are not restrained by what human must do. In other word, I like the idea of your "claiming" of Legolas by Haldir it's full of animal instincs. Those acts do happen in animal kingdom and when Haldir bit Legolas' neck during coupling, that reminds me of sea otter mating ritual. Enough for my rambling, the bottom line is I'm very impressed and I hope you'll update soon. BTW I've read your other story ;)
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I love it! Please update this soon, I want to know how it continues!! Will Haldir get to take Legolas again and is he pregnant now??
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't get me wrong here,I love Haldir/Legolas pairings.But I never thought that Haldir could be so insensitive as to claim Legolas and not care at all of his feelings.