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for Fun With Elves

by Nephthys

person therandomgreenleaf
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, this one's definetely a keeper! Fun with elves indeed! :)
person kittynip9
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I keep hoping that you're going to continue this. Is this just wishful thinking? Anyhoo, I really like the dominant, forceful way that you're portraying Haldir, but Legolas is just coming off as something of asub himself. Is this what you intended, because I see him as being more of the passive-aggressive type here. Tease them untiel they become so frustraded that they jump you. But it's still a good story anyway and I like the others you've done also.
Just my 2 cents.:)
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is there more? It was great.
person Elerrina Rose
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**Appause** Wonderful. Gotta love Hal when he's posessive ;) mmm... wet elves.
I continue to be a devoted fan. *raises wine glass* Keep it coming!
~ Elerrina Rose
person Lady Fae
schedule August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must...have...more...fun...with...Elves! PLEASE?!