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for Oblivious

by GabrielPierce

person Pip
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude this a cool fic.....loving the display of an oblivious Orlie!!! lolol....please please keep writing this one!!
person Oropher
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really, really enjoyed this fic -- beautifully written, so perfectly inside his head, following his thoughts. Thank you for sharing it with everyone.
person kirameki
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting. It's a different format than usual, but that's part of it's charm I think. Orli is being soo.... dense. XD Poor Lij. Anyway, it's really good and I hope you continue it.
person amoureux
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great. so good.
person Ghost
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you don't finish this lovely piece of art I will haunt you forever. :)
person person
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wtie more write more i luuuuurve this story please write more
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have a beautiful voice in this story.
Please continue it soon.
person tapum
schedule April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God.........it's so sweet. Elijah looks like angel pls. i want more. it's not clear. >o<
person Riffraff
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG.......

You have know idea how into this story I am.

You've got a very unusual style of writting but it adds to the story 100%. I'm really looking forward to seeing this continuing, cause it's pretty damn good, and I'm now so fruistraited by Orlando's stupidness that I want the story to end just so Orlando can realise what's going on.

Anyway great story and I'm looking forward to seeing the next update. Keep it up.
person Spoonie
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

so dinky! when we getting more?