rate_review Reviews

Please say that they are not all going to fade. I like Elenor and Ravan and Oiolaire, and even Morehua is interesting, and Legolas and Glorfindel are sweet together. So please don't let them die. I'm very attattched to the personalities.

Åh! Don't kill Glorfindl! Don't kill Legolas ether for that matter. I sincerly hop your not going to do one of those 'they meet again in the next life' that would be just evil. That aside i really enjoyed this chapter (despite the heart attack at the end) and I really liked Legolas' litte relevation.

AHHH! You can't stop there!!! Despite your assurances of a happy ending, I gotta admit I'm nervous! Can't wait to read the next chapter

You're welcome. Yes, we do seem to think along the same lines. Maybe we have the same mental deficiencies? ;-)

Evil chapter... just how I like it. Have you decided how you are picking up the many pieces in which you have left our poor Legolas?

Ok, feeling a little bit sorry for Glorfindel. Hindsight - perfect in clarity, useless in practicality! He doesn't get full forgiveness though 'cos it wasn't like he didn't have a clue as to what was going on.

You're just going to have to practise some more if you have troublr killing of the bad guys. You don't have to post it up but I really think it would be a good writing exercise to re-do the death scene but make Saeldis suffer some more.

Still trying to think of a punishment for you but it is a bit hard trying to be evil so close to Christmas (actually I'd prefer to celebrate the Winter Solstice but it's hard to fight all the commercalisation).

Your writting ability continues to amaze me, I also think I'm growing quite to fond of Glorfindel. (Legolas better be careful...) Looking forward to the next update with much anticipaion as usual.

The 'oh my' was one of not knowing what to say to such wonderfully explicit violence. You know what's funny? I hadn't even thought about it reading like the death scene in Even the Odds until you mentioned it. In fact, I was more worried that a death scene I had planned many moons ago for another WIP story I'm writing would end up sounding like yours when I wrote it, and I would be accused of plagiarizing! But yeah, I can see the resemblance now, and stop dithering yourself into a lather, I don't mind. :-) It's not really THAT similar, and even if it is, I'm sure my subconscious picked it up from another story or movie or something, or perhaps we tapped into the collective unconscious, which meted out such a fine delicacy of bad guy murdering. Just desserts, indeed!

Morier

Yay for happy endings! And you do not suck! I love this story and can't wait to see how it all turns out... can't imagine what else can happen to the poor guy...makes me want to nurse him back to help or rather let Glory do that lol eagerly anticipating the next installment!

Oh dear. It truly doesn't look very good at the moment, does it? And poor Glori, to have to deal with such a thing. I wonder if he needs comforting? Perhaps I should give him a call. ;)
I love the insight we get into Elrond here - that moment when his careful facade cracks for an instant, and we see how much this eats at him. Very well done!
Don't apologize for taking this from psychology to parapsychology. We love both!

Well well well, I finally get my internet connection back and what do I find has been going on in my absence? A certain fanfiction writer has developed an obsession with cliff hangers it would seem. Torturing both characters and readers is extremely naughty and raises the question of how one can dole out punishment in cyberspace. I'll have to think on it.

After all Saeldis has done I think he died a bit too quickly. The cutting up of the body was all very well but he couldn't feel it and it only put Legolais in a bad light. Wasn't it only in chapter 21 or so that Ravan pointed out if they killed Saeldis before exposing him as a monster it would only look bad on them? I liked how the real Legolas made an appearance. Does that mean we're actually going to hear his voice at last? After all the grusome things that have just gone on a little bit of cute fluffyness would be nice. It is almost Christmas after all!

Ah Glorfindel. What can we say there. If only, if only. Yes he deserves to have that going through his head. Couldn't believe it when he stopped to help Saeldis in the first place and then just let him go of on his own without a thought that he might go after Legolas for revenge. Elrond might want someone else to look after Rivendell's defences.