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Leave it Elanor to get things started!
Filler? No, this wasn't filler. This was an intense look at how the seperate spirits are coming together, creating, hopefully, in the end, one complete Legolas. I'm loving it! Enjoy your vacation! We'll be here when you get back!

I'm not familiar with this game, it sounds really fun. I loved Legolas's hesitence over going with them to play it. Great chapter!

Well as much as I enjoy Legolas and Co. I can't wait for it to be just Legolas and Glorfindel...hehe! Congrats on hitting the 10,000 mark, this story is definately one of the few that deserves such a high amount of viewers! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ah! What a fun chapter! I like how you're developing Glorfindel and Legolas' relationship. The game was fun, but can you imagine, all those personalities inside wanting to come out and play? Good thing Ravan can keep then in line! So looking forward to more!

Evil Thranduil? You know, an evil Thranduil just wouldn't have fit in your story, though. Good Thranduil's are nice. *pets your good Thranduil* Oh gee, I'm starting to write reviews like my friend Alakerbaid, now. :-) TWO slashy scenes? Well, gee, you'll get no complaints from me on the matter.

I love the game. Even though old Glorfy wouldn't look old, I can still just picture his cranky bones protesting as he played. I especially liked how they 'scored' with Elladan at the end. :-) Very nice chapter to read. You've a great imagination!

Brain still AWOL but I've managed to lure one cell back. Unfortunately it's feeling abit put upon so I can't put the thoughts in my head into words very well. Basically I'm still reading and likeing your story even if my review is rather crap.

OK, so we've gone over this before and I think you must just be a nicer person than me but Saeldis still bugs. What did his mother say when she saw him? I know you did some terrible things but I still love you so come here so I can give you a hug? I forgive you, I understand or what? How could anyone forgive or forget that?

The whole multiple personalities took another twist when Glorfindel was surrounded by a physical ' multitude of elves' that had all split from the original. Can't describe how that made me feel exactly but it was creepy. And now there is another Legolas so that makes 3. And this new Legolas is made up of lots of the spirits so he's kind of a split personality that has hie own multiple personality himself if you can understand what I mean (hey working with one brain cell here remember).And most of him is going back but some is still staying in Mandos so he can't really be completely healed yet. Caused another headache you know. Might send you the bill for paracetemol!!

Oioloure or what ever his name was turned out to be another shady character. Will we ever know what Toren did? Hope it wasn't anything like what Saeldis did cos that would be seriously sick, sending a child molester into a childs mind.

Thranduil gets to feel the effects of hindsight this time. So what's he going to do about it? Didn't give much detail of the 2 weeks he has been in Rivendel. Glorfindel was much more attentive to try to make up for his one mistake which now doesn't seem so bad compared to Thranduil's. Speaking of which are we going to get more Glorfindel/Legolas interaction? And maybe some little 'original' Legolas growing up, haven't seen much of him at all.

This fic is very exciting. Keep up the good work. Also, I would like to know if you were inspired by the C.S. Friedman book This Alien Shore. The writing styles are very similar. In that book, the main character Jamisia has multiple personalities. Each personality has its own particular look and feel. I hit me when reading at the beginning when Legolas looked in the mirror and said he looked funny. A scene almost exactly repeated in the book. If you haven't read it, I highly suggest it. Very good as it deals with many different mental disorders besides multiple personalities.

Hmm, I love how you did this chapter. The only thing that was a little weird was that only Elrond noticed Legolas coming in, but I'm not complaining because If left room for the very cute interaction between Legolas and Glorfindel.

It's good to spoil good writers... then we keep getting excellent stories like this one! I really liked the hug and the new relationship between Thranduil and Legolas, it really shows Legolas' progress. Although, I have to admit that I'm curious to see how the different spirits merge into one, that is if they ever do.

YAY! Glad Thranduil took that as well as he did. Can't be easy knowing you let your child into the hands of a madman.
Yes, Time is the great healer... but hey, a little love doesn't hurt either. :D