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Only one more chapter to go? Awww. What will we do then? *sigh*
Your beta reader needs their head examined. This chapter was wonderful!!! Warm, sweet, sensual, and tender. Everything that Legolas, and frankly, your readers, would have expected! Romance Novel? No, not at all. If it were a romance novel, then Glori would have pissed Legolas off, and they would have spent the entire story in conflict before having hot wild make-us sex. This was NOT hot wild make-up sex. It was spectacular, sweet, healing sex.
Wonderfully done! First slashy scene, eh? Can't wait to see what you come up with for a second one!

You are welcome for the advice, although I don't remember giving you any. (Unless it was when I told you that drinking while writing made these things come out easier) :-) What a wonderfully long and beautiful chapter! Who says smut can't have romance? I thought it was great, but then, I guess you already knew my feelings about it, so. :-) Legolas needed comfort and slow romance, not hardcore humping, so your choice in mood and setting was perfect, imho. I don't know what you mean about my expectations, although I guess I had rather high expectations for you. You are an awesome writer, so I expected you to write a wonderful chapter with lovely smut and romance ...you did just that!

I'm liking this statement very much: "It was not desire which was good or evil, but the means of its expression that determined its worth." That's rich with moral content. :-) The philosopher in me just loves morality included in fanfiction. Makes it all the better!

Well, I'm all smiles after reading this chapter, it would seem. I will be sorry to see this story end, but hopefully the muses will attack you with another plot and you'll be writing again soon! (So, I'll leave your pinky toe out of this.... unless you'd like some free surgery.) Hasta luego! :-)

Wow. That was great, you should do more of that!

Hmmm, this chapter could only have been better had Legolas gotten his back rub. That said, It was beyond my expectations. (although it would have been nice to see a little more of Legolas in mirkwood)

If you like the Princess Bride you should read the book. (if you havn't already) There is two versions, and I recommned the newer one.

Uh, gee. I don't know how I missed this chapter! I've been looking at my author's page impatiently waiting for you to update, and here you had and I just hadn't read it yet, thinking I had already read chapter 31! :-) Oh, and I hope your vacation went well!

The first kiss! How wonderful. I was wondering how you would broach the topic of sex, being as there are many differing personalities that could be involved in the process. And in fact, at the beginning of the chapter, I was wondering how you would address the topic of the younger personalities, and their response to sex. Glad you figured that out. Maybe now we can read SMUT! SMUT SMUT SMUT! ;-) Legolas needs some good, old-fashioned loving... assuming his other personalities are up for it!

But what's this? Two more chapters? You mean, two more chapters and the story is over? Are you kidding me? *sends you virtual gin* I do so want to read the next chapters, but are you threatening to end this story? I might have to cause irreparable damage to your pinky toe or something...

Hmm, that game sounds fun, I'l have to get my friends to try it. I'm happy Elanor jas grown up, it means Legolas it healing. On the other hand it's sad to see her go. (Even if she is mostly the same) This chapter reminded me of a part from the Princess Bride. "There has been only three perfect kisses since the kiss was invented. This one left them all in the dust."

Have a relaxing vacacion!

I must say...you are very talented. I love your story and can not waite for updates, I tip my keyboard to you. ~DarkDreamer

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They finally kissed and it was AWESOME!!! I can't wait to see what they get up to next, or Elrond's reaction...hehe. And the part with the doll was great too!

Awwww!!!! That last bit was so sweet. I'm glad he's finally healing. Can't wait for the next chapter...

Such a sweet chapter!!!!!!! I bet that with these newly awakening feelings, (and with an older Elanor eagerly awaiting chances to jump to the fore for contact with Glorfy), his application of healing oils to Legolas' scars will take on a new meaning. He's still getting half-naked and getting massaged with oil, right?? You could do a really cute scene showing the new awkwardness of that, as some of the spirits will take it more sexually than others, and some will be likely to respond badly to the sexual interpretation.... perhaps Morenahua (spelling??) would pop in and break things up, and then Leggy would jump in and need comforting from the whole ordeal... anyway, it could provide some lovely angst:)

Happy vacation, and I look forward to your return!!! :) (Where going, by the way?)