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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the Lorien brothers, eh? I suppose that must be the next plot on the burner, eh? Wonderful, eh? Eh? Eh? Ok, I'll stop being a wanton jackass. :-) I liked the bonding ceremony -- never read one at all like it! Very inventive! Mmm, apples and honey. I think I could have helped them get cleaned up, though. And yes, I think you WILL have to hurry up and begin the next story. :-)
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Simply absolutely beautiful. The bonding ceremony itself brought tears to my eyes... the blessings of the elements. And the physical bonding...HOT!!!!
I loved every word of this story and I'm sad to see it end. But satisfied, too. As though everything has come full circle. *sigh* Thank you so much for sharing this!
I loved every word of this story and I'm sad to see it end. But satisfied, too. As though everything has come full circle. *sigh* Thank you so much for sharing this!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a wonderful, rich tale... :)
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was awesome! But what do you mean "The End" it can't end! What about Thranduil's reaction? I guess I don't want it to end, an absolutely great story!! I'll have to go back and read it again and wait to see what you come out with next! Thanks for creating such a wonderful story!
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, he's finally one! I'm so glad that it was a calm affair, it seemed much more fitting. And while Legolas's healing was well and good, I can't wait for his sexual healing. lol. Bring on the elf-smut! Although on a more serious note, I found this line "As he did so the twilight eyes opened, and Glorfindel could see dusk drawing near." to be absolutley fantastic. Very pretty and poetic. Keep it coming!
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Awww! Glori and Legs are being all cute again! Loved the merging of the personalities. Wish we could have had one last talk with Ravan about the whole thing, but alas, I guess it's all for the best! Whoo hooo! Lets go spy on the bonding, shall we?
Awww! Glori and Legs are being all cute again! Loved the merging of the personalities. Wish we could have had one last talk with Ravan about the whole thing, but alas, I guess it's all for the best! Whoo hooo! Lets go spy on the bonding, shall we?
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the description of how the many Leggy's became one. I think you belie instead of belay, though. You know, I'd never really thought of it like that, but I suppose an elven ear is leaf-shaped, isn't it? :-) Well, that was not a nice place to end the chapter, but I suppose I should be happy that there will be another to read after this. Will the next be the last? *cries*
Finish a story before you start another one? Gee, that's a novel idea. :-) Wish I had thought of that. Anyway, you have a LJ? I'll have to find you, then, because you know I'll want to read what you are writing, the moment you post it to the web. Nope, I have no idea how the equivalency works. It is not really equivalent... I mean, if one human life = one eternity, than how does one divide say 70 years by eternity? I think it is measured in something like 144 human years to one elven, but I can't remember! Go check the encyclopedia of middle earth for it. If I had a better internet connection, I'd do it for you, but alas...
Anyway, I ramble. Wonderdful, as always, and I tearfully and horn-ily await the next installment!
Morier
Finish a story before you start another one? Gee, that's a novel idea. :-) Wish I had thought of that. Anyway, you have a LJ? I'll have to find you, then, because you know I'll want to read what you are writing, the moment you post it to the web. Nope, I have no idea how the equivalency works. It is not really equivalent... I mean, if one human life = one eternity, than how does one divide say 70 years by eternity? I think it is measured in something like 144 human years to one elven, but I can't remember! Go check the encyclopedia of middle earth for it. If I had a better internet connection, I'd do it for you, but alas...
Anyway, I ramble. Wonderdful, as always, and I tearfully and horn-ily await the next installment!
Morier
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely fantastic chapter! The revelation of their love was so beautiful it was everything I'd hoped it would be and more. This has got to be one of the best stories I've read. The only thing I'd wish for would be to see some of Legolas' journies to Mirkwood. I would love an interlude showing him getting reaquainted his family and rediscovering his home through new eyes. But regardless, I love this story and I love you!
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! An excellent blend of tenderness and sensuality, with a touch of angst besides:) It was very realistically portrayed, in my humble opinion - I'm glad you had them wait a good long time, and that Glorfy was willing to play a passive role at the end there, allowing Leggy to find his own pace and meet his needs (as to clothing, etc., that would make him more comfortable). Yay - those two elves deserve some lovin'!
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, and not too "romance novel-ish" at all, in my opinion. It would have to take courage and trust on Legolas's part and patience and consideration on Glorfindel's part to get Legolas through this huge step in his recovery. I think you showed that very well.
On the other hand, there are some interestingly kinky aspects to the thought of just how many people -- of varying genders, ages, and even species -- Glorfindel was making out with here...
On the other hand, there are some interestingly kinky aspects to the thought of just how many people -- of varying genders, ages, and even species -- Glorfindel was making out with here...