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Oh! Poor Legolas! I hope you send one of the twins to his rescue soon. :) His tormented heart and mind need to be shown some compassion and love.

Nik,
This story is very bold. Tackling Dissociative Disorder is not easy, but so far, you are doing a pretty bang up job. I love psycholgical thrillers! Looking forward to the next update.

ok it's cleared up a little bit but still rather strange!
The voices in his head were just so different it seemed like a character in one of Terry Pratchett's discworld novels. There a bloke had different personalities but they were the spirits of actual people who had lived, died and then kind of popped back from ' the other side' and just used his body. Can't remember which book it was in ( he's written nearly 30 now!) but if you don't read them already I'd recommend them.
However, back to your story I thought maybe the voices were from elfves the tutor had killed. By the way if the tutor has been abusing elflings I hope he does get a knife stuck in him.
Still confused about you hinting that Legolas might not be the original though. I mean, the king and queen had a baby and called him Legolas. Why or how couldn't he be the original? Sanity still at stake here so bang out the chapters!

Great chapter as usual!!! Legolas seemed more aware of the other personalities this time.s ths that mean Raven talked to him or hs bes before and you just didn't go into it?

Thank you for another superb update! Whenever you add a chapter you make my day. You continue to have me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for more; please update soon!

So so good! I feel so sorry for Legolas and hope that that mean elf isn't able to convince the others. I'm glad that Glorfindel and Elrond have their doubts about him and hope that he gets his in the end. I can't wait for more and am on the edge of my seat. Please update soon!

Your updates make me so happy, I really love this story. (And the elves are great characterization as always) Just one thing I have been wondering. Are the elves in legolas' head real spirits that lost their bodies or just multiple personalities? Ether way I'm sure this story canonly get more interesting.

Good as always but teasingly short!!! more please!

Still not quite getting this story. What do you mean Legolas is not the original? It is his body isn't it?
Where are all those other elf spirits from? Please try and explain a little more in the stort cos I'm starting to go bit crazy myself!!

I, too, get a bit-o'-the nerves when posting and reading reviews. I am new to the fandom..are you?.. I would say this: Allay your fears, you are writing an amazing and riveting story and I, for one, am following avidly!. Can't wait for the next chapter!!