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for Voices In The Dark

by Nikkiling

schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Just found it the other day. I don't know much about multiple personality disorder (except what I learned in undergraduate psych degree) but you are doing a wonderful job oaracaracterising the different 'voices' and their appearances in Legolas' life. One of my stories deals with something similar, although I'm using post-traumatic stress disorder as a means of dealing with the 'voice' in Legolas head. He's had a very traumatic childhood in your st-- c-- can't wait to see the evil teacher pay for his vile abuse of trust!

Morier
person Linauri
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I already said this to you in person, but.... *bouncing up and down* MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE... :D
person zed
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you're still undecidedtakitaking votes for a love interest I definetly vote for Glorfindel.
In chapter 4 for you said ' the handsome elf lord had stuck in the young archer's mind' which I thought was quite sweet seeing as he seems to bloke everything else out. Elanor liked him in chapter 9 as well!
I also think Saeldis should die . I know he had a really tragic past and all that but it still doesn't excuse him from commiting child abuse. Being a victim doesn't give him the right to hurt other people.
You should also read Terry Prachett but not til after you've finished this story so get writing!
person eep
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! Thanks for another great chapter.
I don't care how tragic Saeldis' past or how mad he may be, I am really looking forward to his painful, greusome death. Can't wait.
Please update soon because I'm dying for more!
person Crookis
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Unquestionably Ravan was aware of what would happen should all the memories resurface, and full realization finally hit. Oiolaire couldn't fade, but the rest certainly could. He knew, and he was counting on it. "

Ah! What is this supposed to mean? I thought he was the good guy. Plotting to take over Legoforeforever or somthing? Good, chapter as always but these plot twists are starting to get to me.
person Karen
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a dear! I hope Elrond will be able to help Legolas soon. I can only imagine how tortured he must feel.
person Crookis
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find this chapter very timely as I just watched the movie Secratary and it deals witme cme colorful characters. Great writting as always, I check to see if you update EVERYDAY. She almost called him Glory...
person eep
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! So so happy!
This story continues to enthrall and delight me! I loved Legolas (almost) calling Glorfindel Glory at diner. Is he going to be the love interest? *hopes* I love L/G. (But really, I love L/anyone)
Can't wait for more; please update soon!
person Linauri
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! More! But, oh, I just wanted to cry at this chapter. *Sniffle* I suspected that Saeldis was either an exposure risk or a past abuser, but this... can I take a page from your book and drop him off that cliff at the coast? Of course that would only be after I did some other nasty things to him. Using him for my cat's new scratching post/ litter box comes to mind. *Evil chuckle* Anyway, enough of my rambling. Write more. Oh, and if you could post those books and their authors in you LJ, I'd love to look them up. Or borrow them from you. Or something.

Love and huggles,
Lin
person Linauri
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm finally reviewing. I know I tell you in person and on our LJs what I think, but I thought it would be nice (now that I have a few moments to spare for it) to let everyone else who reads this know what I think. So here it is. I LOVE THIS STORY! I can't wait to read more, and you better hurry with lots and lots of posts, cuz it's really good. I already told you that you're in my top ten list, didn't I? Cuz you are. Totally top ten, maybe even top five. Hang on while I check my list... yep definately top five. KEEP WRITING. And I have to agree. MPD is pretty cool for a disasociative disorder. I'm glad there's someone else out there that I can chat with about psych. Cool subject, huh? OK, I should probably wrap this up, so to recap: COOL! WRITE MORE SOON!

Love and huggles,
Lin