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for Voices In The Dark

by Nikkiling

person Crookis
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ew, fish. I hate fish, and eel. Great chapter as always; can't wait for the next one though since you'v hinted at a wammy!
person zed
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Glorfindel! Chapter 14 was very sweet and almost like a first contact but I'm dying for some action here. It's good that Elrond and Glorfindel are both on Legolas side but isn't it time to see a bit of healing? A small step to give us some hope?

You mentioned you know how DID is cured or, I would have thought, at least managed in humans and although you might hto cto change it for elves (or more to the point to give the story a happy ending hint hint) I wondered if you could put some brief notes up at the end of the chapters about it so we can learn something about DID with out wading through all the books that you obviously have.
person Yanic
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Can't wait to read more!
person louise
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No problem it is a very good story

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louise
person ki
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say this chapter isn't confusing at all. I followed it quite clearly. Though I do have to say you are evil for leaving it on a cliff hanger. Even if I do suspect who it was who just entered. One of two people depending on your mind. And so far(Though I don't really like slash)I do love your story. But you already knew that.
person Crookis
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so evil! You have a crazy Legolas two pants clad twins a horny Glorfindel and Nothing happens!!!! (Well kinda) but I want more, Please keep it up I love this story.
person Karen
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, I cannot wait for more. I am glad he is getting closer to help. I can only imagine how torured he must feel inside.
person louise_oblique
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I love watching how this story develops. Take care

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louise
person Thalionwen
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cannot tell you just how much I am enjoying this wonderful, intricate tale!. I love how you do not opt for the *obvious* in your plot. It makes for engrosing storytelling. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome. I'm glad you like Even the Odds, I've worked hard on it (most of the time ;-) ) My, my, how violent Legolas acted in this chapter. I know it's too early to talk about healing the rift in selves that Legolas has undergone, but I'm interested to see how this will be resolved, and when the truth will come out. Impatient as I am, I will await the next chapter before I start plaguing you with questions, though. Keep up the excellent writing!

Morier