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You're being cruel again. In the last chapter you went and cleared up a lot of confusing points and now you've created more. Oiolaire's a human spirit? Have you read about someone with DID who doesn't seem to have a human personality? They say some people have a more prehistoric/animal side to them. You've mentioned reincarnation before as well and some people believe that you can actually come back as any sort of organism ie dog, fish, tree. Headache time again!

Had to laugh at changing the name to Fred though. I actually use to work with someone who decided the name his parents chose for him wasn't right and so asked everyone to call him Fred. Elves also have several names. From what I can gather from various sources the parents can each give a different name. Some people just aren't good at compromising.

I like this chapter, Legolas is just so sad. Can't wait for another chapter. (It would totaly suck to learn what Legolas did.)

OH, MAN, you just HAD to stop it there, didn't you? Please continue! I think it's really neat how he didn't fade, because of all the others taking the pain. And Eleanor is so energetic and amusing...I'll be sad to see her go. Raven seems so /resigned/, though. He's so strong -why isn't he more positive? And I thought Aenos was quite...cold. Morhuea was good, too.

yay for updates!! Oh no! Legolas can't fade! Absolutely *adored* that little one-on-one bit with Glorfindel helping Legolas, just *perfect*. I really can't wait to see where all this leads!

Good. I like G/L. Stephen King ought to know such things, I suppose. I don't know about you, but when I get to the point where it is time to make a firm decision about the story and I can't do it, I end up flipping a coin or something. I wonder if SK ever does stuff like that. YEAH! I'm pleased you are having problems killing off Saedlis. He's an evil, evil elf, and I like him, but he probably SHOULD die. Who says the bad guy in my story is dead? Oh, wait, I guess he is. Oh well. We need to start a Bad Guy Preservation Society. SAVE OUR SAEDLIS. Hey, that's SOS *realizes she's being a sleepy dork.* Good chapter!

Morier

ooohhh, the plot thickens! glorefindel and legolas relationship is wonderful, i love it! i can't wait to see what you write next!

Wow, what a chapter. Finally got an explanation of what you meant when you said Legolas wasn't the original. There are two of them. Was that cheating a little bit? I'll let you off if you get a happy ever after ending.
Feels like a 'balencing on a knife edge' part of the story. They.ve found out what's wrong but don't know how to fix it and are running out of time. I think I indentify with Elrond the most. He's interested about it on several levels, healer, scientific, mere curiousity but seems more detached.
On an optimistic note it seems if they can heal the mind then the body will heal its self. However, by the looks of it, if the mind heals the 'original' Legolas gets to come out to play. Ravan said he was 'very young'. How young exactly? Is poor Glory going to have to wait for Legolas to grow up before he gets his lover? I wouldn't mind cos it would mean a longer story but Glorfindel might be a bit dissappointed.

Hmm, I think I missed a chapter or two. But hey, made a long, enjoyable read for today! Anyway, you've done an excellent job of indicating Legolas' inner turmoil about trusting Elrond and Glorfindel. Gee, he couldn't even trust his magistra -- still feeling sorry for the poor Elf! The change in eye colors is very effective. I can't remember, but this is G/L, eh? ;-)

Morier

This is a deep and thought provoking work. A masterpiece.looklook forward to each new chapter, eagerly. I note you say you have a live journal. Have you considered posting this at . . . http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=lotr_fanfiction? It's a friendly site that allows posting of all sorts of LOTR stories, as long as they are properly headed.

I'm waiting, breathlessly, for your future chapters. Thank you again for sharing your considerable talent.

Hi, I've been following your story from the start. Sorry I haven't posted to tell you how wonderful it is. I constantly come here to adultfanfiction just to see if maybe this time we got an extra post. (I know wishfull thinking that I'm sure your muses don't appriciate. )

On the were to put your story there are sites like this where you post directly to the site and there are lists where people allso post. http://www.aragorn-legolas.5u.com, Cassia's site Melorn Chronicles would be a place it could go when it's done. (I don't remember if you said you were going to do slash or not. If no slash it could go there. MC is a slash-free site, even though on occation it's moderators have read some. Even if you do end up with slash at the end maybe you could author it in such a maner that you could easily write a non slash version too? Then it could go there. I'm sure it would be okay if slashless.) She does have a list on yahoo were works in progress are posted, and it's a fun list, it's watched so flames and stupid little wars can't start which is pretty good for a list with over 1000 people on it. Fanfiction.net is usless they pull stories and ban authors without every reading the stories. All someone has to do is complainmeonmeone complained about one of Cassia's stories there (one of her more tame ones so I don't get it at all) and Fanfiction.net pulled her story and banned her for awhille. Soooooo I would recomend avoiding them. Eternal at http://www.intense-illusions.net/eternal/search.php?action=recent might be okay but they're not much better for updating, infact they might be a little worse. You might want to consider joining some of the bigger lists, your stories are posted allot quicker that way. Cassia's is one but there are a bunch of good lists targeted to a large varity of fanfiction intersts and I could send you that info privavly if you want it. On the technology side it's very easy to post on a list, if you need help I'd be happy to walk you through it.

Again I LOVE your story please keep writting!!!