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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no! poor legolas never catches any breaks! all we need is our favorite elf to help him out again! write more soon!
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH! Oh you naughty naughty Elfling! If you don't get in here and save Legolas right now I'm turning you over to Thranduil for your punishment! And you know he's far more creative in that direction than I am! :)
Seriously, though, good chapter! Can't wait for more.
Seriously, though, good chapter! Can't wait for more.
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say put f all the cliff hanger this ones leaves the most interesting posibilitys. Please keep it up I'm dying to know what happens here!
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am still reading, dearest, I am happier that Legolas does not have to endure this alone and that Elrond and Glorfindel are there for him. Especially Glorfindel. Keep up the great story telling and you know I will keep reading!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My that was an interesting confrontation, was E and co. laced near the scene for a reason? Like the dramatic bashie in kind (Poor Elanor, She'll probably beat herself up a bit for this one) You better make sure Glorfindel kisses all of Legolas' bobos better!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The first part of that chapter was weird cos your mind kept on trying to picture a little girl when you knew it was a full grown male elf running around.
Nasty nasty cliffhanger. Where's Glofindel when you need him? We all know Elrond's in bed and won't like being disturded!!
I can understand why you'd want a human spirit, cos then Legolas won't fade, but I'm not close to working it out. Is the end nigh?
Nasty nasty cliffhanger. Where's Glofindel when you need him? We all know Elrond's in bed and won't like being disturded!!
I can understand why you'd want a human spirit, cos then Legolas won't fade, but I'm not close to working it out. Is the end nigh?
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am still thoroughly enjoying this story and its complexities. You are really doing a marvelous job. Kudos!!! :D
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh i hope glorfindel or someone comes soon--we don't want legolas to suffer for doing this... write more soon, i need to know what's gonna happen!!!!!
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter left many possibilities... Gods! you are wicked! *grin*. It would be SO easy to just hate Saeldis, but one must wonder *why* he is the way he is.. The sad and horrible fact in our world is that all too often the perpetrators of such horrendous abuse, wer often abused in such way themselves. It becomes literaly a chain of action/reaction. I so hope that your Legolas finally gets to walk a path of healing. One in which *all* the fragments of his fea walk as one, once more. Breathlessly awaiting your next chapter!
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Oh dear! You aren't going to let him kill Saeldis are you? Not a kinslaying! I'm not saying the bastard doesn't deserve it, but Legolas wouldn't survive the misunderstanding in its wake. Someone will hear, right? Someone will come?
Oh you naughty naughty Elfling leaving us with such a cliffhanger.
Oh you naughty naughty Elfling leaving us with such a cliffhanger.