rate_review Reviews

I must admit I am an awful reviewer when it comes to voicing feedback and writing down what I thought of a story in a good way.
But this story was simply beautiful. Your style of writing is easy to read and beautiful. The idea of the story and the way you wrote it all is amazing and I apploud you for writing one of the best stories I have ever read!

I'm buzzin g back in here, though I have read and reviewed before. Thought maybe I'd reread, but also I need to give a connection to Jaxxy so I can be reinstituted as a member, so sorry to bother you, but keep up your always interesting writing!

I loved this story. Really. Though I admit, I hated Legolas acting like a little girl. I had to assume you were careful about your research and he might very well act this way.

Kalima

Wow, Nikkiling. I practically read this in one sitting. In the end I managed to get through it over a period of two nights. Could not stop reading...it's freaking brilliant. It's one of the best stories I've read in some time. Normally anything dealing with child abuse is something I steer away from, (those kinds of disturbing images I'd rather not have in my head) but this story is an exception. It's wonderful. Anyway, best of luck and keep writing.

wow..... that was really, really great :D..... I think the explanation with the tree wass really good....... ^-^ What about a epilogue? just so we know what happend afterwards???

Here I am on Ch. 26. I don't know why this fan fic site showed no other chpaters than ... I forget where I was ... but I see you have many more! I thank you. I also thought you'd like to know you probably mean "alleviate" instead of "elevate the [grief - or some such]" and when you said "the other formally dead elf" you mean " the other formerly dead elf."

I hope you don't mind this. This site lets you edit, yes?

I continue to enjoy this story. Thanks for writing it.

Masterful.

Beautifully done. I'm glad you didn't listen to your Beta implying it was just a typical romance ending.

A real gem.

Mate had to come up to get me at 3:33 am. An addictive story, as I was driven to find some emotional relief, hoping Legolas would open up to Elrond or Glorfindel. ANyway, just for a second wearing my copyediting hat, in the second paragraph CH. 18, when one is peeking around a corner, for example, spell with two e's, the way I just did.

Thanks for writing. I sure hope you won't leave us hanging. I try to limit my reading to pieces that are complete because I've been left in the middle of the story by too many authors. I woke up this morning realizing I'd been dreaming in your world. I don't want to get stuck there! (Well, if you come to a happier place, I would actually love to be stuck there in my dreaming . . . .)

Ooo, I just knew I was going to be left. I hope you are updating religiously. I really love your story. Do you want my copyedits? Maybe I should post them to your email, if you've listed it. I'm sure you know you have many waiting for your updates, so I'll try to refrain from repeating the "update please!" demands so prevalent in reviews. It's hard, but I'll try.

I've been reading this story just tonight, and I know it's going to drive me crazy if it isn't finished, and given the care you are lavishing upon it, I'm sure the next few chapters can't be the end.

Very fine writing, and you're so good at getting to the emotional truth. As one who sometimes copyedits for a living, may I just mention a couple of things you may want to correct? "Would you rather us go someplace else?" I think you mean, "Would you rather we go someplace else?" And "you're shoulder . . ." should be "your shoulder . . . ."

Thank you for writing. I hope you're happy I'm up all night reading this and will pay for it tomorrow! I told my mate I'd be up soon. Hah! I hope he didn't wait.