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for Always

by AnnaB

person MoonSong
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl, this is just like McDonalds, and Im LOVIN IT!! But you just must give Caitlin her body back, maybe a new and imporved body or SOMETHING..this was such a good gritty storey that turned all romantic and hot n heavy but sweet (*PHEW run on sentence!!) and when she died I SCREAMED right along with Leggy! I was mortified! I was saaaadddd! I WEPT REAL TEARS!!!!
PLEASE Write MORE!! We wants it! We needs it!!!! And can I get fries with that?
Blessed Be!!
person Lady Vendea
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter...thank you!
person Lady Vendea
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know why this story rocks? Because the girl's name is Caitlin! That's why!! Besides that, I love this story. Please Update soon!

~Lady Vendea
person Piper\'stwin21
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I still love this story alot but how could u do this I mean she gets hit with an arrow and u end the chapter!!!! Please update soon please!!!! ;D :(!
person Piper\'stwin21
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really getting into this I really want more to read so try to keep those chapters coming its really good!!!
person PapSett
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for my first review ! I am having a very good time with this story , it ise tae taking a vacation from my "real" writing (I am trying to write a novel ). I will continue to update this as often as I can ... this site doesn't always go along with me tho , seems it's DOWN more often than it RUNS .

I realize "Always" is moving a lot slower sexually than most of the other stories here , but I wanted more that PWP . I enjoy chariture development more than anything . I want to get to know my players (Especially Legolas ... oh , yes , I'd looovvve to get to know Legolas ... but I digress.... :-P) , and let things go from there . Chapter 7 will be heating up , tho ...

Anna