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for ~The King's Vineyard~

by aseltym

schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I read myself through your wonderful and amazing story the last two days.
I just wanted to thank you for writing such a wonderful and and inspiring story, regardless that you will most likely not read this, since it was long ago that you wrote it.
Thank you for your amazing imagination and the incredible way you did describe this story and its setting. I could not help to fall in love with your characters and the soft words you used to write it down. I think you are an amazing writer, thank you for sharing your imagination with us all.
Suryallee
person Cymoril
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutely wonderfully written! You have managed to take an abused fandom and write a non-Mary Sue original female character and tie it in with a refreshingly unique storyline. You've accomplished what so many fangirls try to do with their horrendous self-inserts: incorporate a pretty girl into the storyline and have her make a difference. Cella was realistic and a girl a lot of readers can probably relate to. You have a good grasp of canon and manage to educate your readers about the intricacies of the Lord of the Rings series while making it quite enjoyable. This has to be the best Lord of the Rings fic I've EVER read, and I've been at this for years. I have no doubt that you will make something of yourself out in the original fiction world.

Kudos, and keep on writing!
person MarzBar
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely epilogue. Gave me a bunch of WAFF's.
person Brazgirl
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will miss this story! Wonderful lines, those of the end. Very good! I hope to read more of your Thranduil. He is delightful.
person MarzBar
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful story. I will look for the epilogue.
person brazgirl
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... I see this is on the way to the end. I trully hope to read more from your Elfking. Thranduil was too political talking about love... maybe because he was talking to humans!!! Nice chapter.
person MarzBar
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are shamelessly teasing us Mary!! Hanging on to this cliff by one toe now. Anyway, who could deny the magnificent Thranduil whatever he wants? Not me.
person MarzBar
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeek!! Is the imposing and beautiful Thranduil going to ask permission to keep Cella as his mistress/concubine? We'll be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.
person Ainoah
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is one of the best fanfiction of lotr I've read the chraters are
very well done, the vineyard, the kingdom, the landscape..everything is perfectly detailed It made me go
completly in the story, what I like the most is how deep you go
in the felings of Cella for the king, and in the details he have in the relationship, I can't wait to
see how the story devolpe and see how it would end, ohhh yess and read more hot sex with the elfking on it lol
person menelui
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks