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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just out of curiosity, which of you wrote this one? It doesn't say. I like it, even though I'm not the biggest of Boromir fans. Hee.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this story so much. Is Sons of the Steward its sequel? Haven't read that one yet. I want Legolas to return for Vana...duhduhduuuuuhhh! XD Ahem. Yeah. So whipped, man. I am completely addicted.
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this SOOOOO cries for a sequel! I mean, come on... the consequences of Aragorn wearing the ring, if only for a short period of time. Legolas threatening to come back in a year, the whole Boromir situation... yes *nodds her head and starts poking authors* this certainly has "Sequel" written all over it. *jumps up and down*
Congrats on another fantastic story finished!!! Sorry, this review is short and sweet, but it is morning over here and I have to hurry to start work. :)
Congrats on another fantastic story finished!!! Sorry, this review is short and sweet, but it is morning over here and I have to hurry to start work. :)
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*glaring daggers at authors*
Lucky YOU you gave me back my Steward. *hugs Boromir and gets out the athelas* And don't you hurt him again, he needs to be perfectly fit to *cough, cough* fullfil certain duties as the story continues. *g*
Those two remind me a bit of Red and Scarlett (don't laugh), obviously crazy about each other, but they would rather swallow their tongue before they would ever admit it, lol!
Cannot wfor for the next chapter and still love the fact you keep updating so frequently these days.
BTW, I was watching a French movie with my hubby a few days ago and got a nice idea out of it which you might find interesting for a new story. Will tell you about it once I find the tto gto go to the KOMS message board, OK?
CYA!
Lucky YOU you gave me back my Steward. *hugs Boromir and gets out the athelas* And don't you hurt him again, he needs to be perfectly fit to *cough, cough* fullfil certain duties as the story continues. *g*
Those two remind me a bit of Red and Scarlett (don't laugh), obviously crazy about each other, but they would rather swallow their tongue before they would ever admit it, lol!
Cannot wfor for the next chapter and still love the fact you keep updating so frequently these days.
BTW, I was watching a French movie with my hubby a few days ago and got a nice idea out of it which you might find interesting for a new story. Will tell you about it once I find the tto gto go to the KOMS message board, OK?
CYA!
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME, YA'LL!!!! Keep the pys pys coming, PLEASE!! I believe this is my fav storey yet, and I keep up with a BUNCH of them!! Gotta love the ever luscious Dark Legolas!! And Boromir aint so bad hisself, but WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM??? IS HE DEAD??? And who was the conduit that turned poor ole Legolas???? MORE MORE MORE MORE!! Its like a S&M soap opera with Elves for stars...
Blessed Be.....
Blessed Be.....
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is fascinating to speculate on how Sauron's darkness would affect respective members of the Fellowship and their allies. I have enjoyed your stories (those that I have read, I think I am beginning to sense your style). And, of course, any kind of Boromir sexuality has me glued. Umm...has me riveted. Umm..well you get the idea. Time to pop in Lady Chatterly. Umm, watch it. Oh dear. Maybe just a cold shower? Please finish the story, must know what happens to Legolas, if Boromir et al escape.
Marianne
Marianne
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh; Dark Legolas- my guilty pleasure. I love the way this story is going- update soon!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the snappy banter between Boromir and the OFC in this story, very well done, I love it, when women are bitchy enough to verbally stand there ground, lol! And as for Bormir: Mind you, one really cannot make up one's mind, whether to kiss him or slap him, lol! But he *is* cute in a gruff sort of way! :)
And it's no use hiding your dream, Boromir, we girls *know* you dreamt of *HER*! :)
Interesting conversation between Legolas and Elrond. I liked the phrase about a fallen creature in a fallen place, very sad! And yes, Elrond, it was a downright stupid idea to go inside, silly...
OK, I am gready and I can only say, I want updates, updates, updates. *gives authors the Elrond LOOK*
BTW, don't even beginn to think, I have forgotten about your other stories, I will seriously start kicking your more precious body parts in the nearer future until you start posting new chapters for "Winter's Heart" for example. I told you I love the twins, especially when they are being naughty boys, lol!
See you on the message board, will post again in a few days and tell you about my encounter with some of the guys.
And it's no use hiding your dream, Boromir, we girls *know* you dreamt of *HER*! :)
Interesting conversation between Legolas and Elrond. I liked the phrase about a fallen creature in a fallen place, very sad! And yes, Elrond, it was a downright stupid idea to go inside, silly...
OK, I am gready and I can only say, I want updates, updates, updates. *gives authors the Elrond LOOK*
BTW, don't even beginn to think, I have forgotten about your other stories, I will seriously start kicking your more precious body parts in the nearer future until you start posting new chapters for "Winter's Heart" for example. I told you I love the twins, especially when they are being naughty boys, lol!
See you on the message board, will post again in a few days and tell you about my encounter with some of the guys.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, this may perhaps be one of your best stories, because it has such a strong plotline.
I like the interaction between Legolas, Boromir and your OC. What I truely love about this story: You have often used the motive of oneyouryour characters succumbing to darkness, but never was one of your OCs in danger of falling to the dark forces, this is the first time and it makes such a difference IMHO. Legolas as the one who has already sided with the dark forces and Bormor and your OC are in danger of doing so as well. The argument between Boromir and your OC were highly entertaining and the dream sequence was just brilliant, as one only realizes towards the end, that it is in fact Sauron she was tricked to lay with, not Boromir. I really think you should keep up the idea of having your characters change their positions (I was trying to find a different phrase for that, but I am too tired to think of one, hope you understand what I mean anyhow), it makes your stories less predictable. Because otherwise, it becomes really easy after a while to make out how things work: OC (generally good girl), elf or human (the bad guy for the hot N/C stuff ;) ), elf or human (the good guy coming to the rescue and the final happy end bed fun). Not that I don't enjoy that, mind you... *g* But you are taking your story two steps further this twhicwhich is a good thing. Surprise the readers.
I also liked the dream sequence, because I felt it was vwellwell and carefully written. It is nice to have these little details like rain on one's face etc. It makes the picture more vivid.
And BTW, since I am to lazy to go over there and post there, too: I like your latest story, too. Here, again, your female OC is appearently not the totall good girl, but quite inscrutable regarding her motives, which makes her all the more interesting.
I like the interaction between Legolas, Boromir and your OC. What I truely love about this story: You have often used the motive of oneyouryour characters succumbing to darkness, but never was one of your OCs in danger of falling to the dark forces, this is the first time and it makes such a difference IMHO. Legolas as the one who has already sided with the dark forces and Bormor and your OC are in danger of doing so as well. The argument between Boromir and your OC were highly entertaining and the dream sequence was just brilliant, as one only realizes towards the end, that it is in fact Sauron she was tricked to lay with, not Boromir. I really think you should keep up the idea of having your characters change their positions (I was trying to find a different phrase for that, but I am too tired to think of one, hope you understand what I mean anyhow), it makes your stories less predictable. Because otherwise, it becomes really easy after a while to make out how things work: OC (generally good girl), elf or human (the bad guy for the hot N/C stuff ;) ), elf or human (the good guy coming to the rescue and the final happy end bed fun). Not that I don't enjoy that, mind you... *g* But you are taking your story two steps further this twhicwhich is a good thing. Surprise the readers.
I also liked the dream sequence, because I felt it was vwellwell and carefully written. It is nice to have these little details like rain on one's face etc. It makes the picture more vivid.
And BTW, since I am to lazy to go over there and post there, too: I like your latest story, too. Here, again, your female OC is appearently not the totall good girl, but quite inscrutable regarding her motives, which makes her all the more interesting.
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another freaky, goth, tortuous love storey from hell..I love it!! U just must add more to this one, it rocks! Theres nothin sexier than a dark Legolas..even tho something that LOOKS like that would be hard pressed to find someone to rape. Keep em comin (hehe) and blessed be, ya'll!