rate_review Reviews

This should be called "Absolutely Fabulous"! Brilliantly written, classy erotica and long chapters - what more can a reader ask for?! ... Perhaps a sequel or more of similar stuff please ;-))

I love this story. I started it late one night and at two a.m. was still reading! keep up the great work I very much enjoy reading what you write.

AWWW! That ending was a happy one when you think about it. Yes, Thranduil was hurt, but at least Sinda and Haldir get to live out their immortal lives together. Very awesome story. Thank you so much for writing it.

Where to start? I'm incoherent right now, having read the whole thing straight through in one sitting, but I didn't think it would end this way and...well, I just wanted to say that I always love your writing! You had me worried with all the warnings you put at the beginning of chapter 14, but I liked what you did with the ending a lot. Also, what could be better than being sandwiched between two hot blond elves? Maybe having Elladan and Elrohir around to lick one's toes at the same time, but other than that...this was the ultimate! You are so lucky, being in a story like that! I guess I'll have to go write me some elf-sex one of these days too!*grin*

Very nice. I really like the way you write!

I thought I was going to be reading a PWP. You really fooled me. I suspect your muse fooled you as well. I did cry so you can rest assured that your writing was wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

Sinda, I love this story so much I couldn't wait until you'd post more at the Yahoo group, so I cheated. But, I will read each chapter over again when you do post, because this is worth reading twice, and more. Please do not write another ending. To me this was perfect; the angst made the feelings so much more real, and it was a battle to the very end - never obvious how it would end. And it ended well for all involved parties. That is a fluffy ending to me, even if there was angst on the way. You rock!
Hugs,
Mal

Sinda,
I have not had a chance to read this story yet, but I have read some of your other writings. I find your writing skills to be excellent, and I think they are improving all the time. Do not let the nasty flamers get you down. They are people who have not yet learned an important lesson - that what you give out, you get back. What goes around comes around. When you speak cruelly with deliberate intention to wound, that is one of the worst actions one can take. Some people seem to lack the ability to put themselves into someone else's shoes. Eventually they will understand that when you hurt someone else, you are hurting yourself, because we are all connected.

Your story is yours to do with as you wish, your unique creation that no one else has the right to ridicule. If one enjoys a story, it is always appropriate to thank the author. If one does not enjoy a story, it is always appropriate to stay silent.

I took a quick peek at the last chapter and what I saw showed that you have a distinct talent for storytelling as well as a solid understanding of the mechanics of writing. My hat is off to you! Thank you for sharing your talent.

Never read something as bad as this. Stop dreaming of smut and try to live a real life.

This story was unbelievably amazing. It was so original and well thought through. I could tell you put a huge amount of time and imagination into this story. I truly loved this story and havent read one like it ever. Keep writing you have a real flare for it.