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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoaaaaaa! Those were some really HOT chapters. You definitely have a talent for writing erotic love scenes. Very nice *pant pant* LOL!
But beyond that, you've definitely created a character that is interesting and very likeable. Her internal struggle to stay faithful to Legolas is going to be extemely entertaining to watch...especially now that Haldir is in the picture! LOL!
I see that the sequel is already up. Yay! I'm off to read it now. Great job on this one...I'm sure I'll find the sequel just as entertaining. :D
Michelle...
But beyond that, you've definitely created a character that is interesting and very likeable. Her internal struggle to stay faithful to Legolas is going to be extemely entertaining to watch...especially now that Haldir is in the picture! LOL!
I see that the sequel is already up. Yay! I'm off to read it now. Great job on this one...I'm sure I'll find the sequel just as entertaining. :D
Michelle...
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to finish this - I was kinda doing mad amounts of my own writing there, and didn't give myself any time to sit and read. This was a GREAT story, and I'm sure you've already gotten my review for the sequel - Excellent work!
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I already reviewed this gorgeous baby in the other section, but certainly there is no harm to it if I leave my ramblings here as well, lol!
It totally made my morning to see that you are actually going to do a sequel to this story. How wonderful it is not just us, your faithful reader but you the author as well who feels like picking up on the tension between your OC and Haldir sounds like a good idea. ;) That bratty elf just cannot be ignored, can't he? *grins* I am just so very curious to see what you have in store for those two and what part they are all going to play in your follow up story.
Let me just tell you I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story from day one. It was intelligent, well written, had a good plot, took things to a different level but without loosing sight of the original concept of ME, had a good, mature and likable OC and last but not least it was sensual and sexy as sin. *g* One can tell that you clearly enjoy writing for writing's sake, because you simply enjoy doing so. And you certainly got the hang of it. ;) So whatever it is that you are sooo doing right... please continue.
*Sitting under the mistletoe and waiting for the sequel*
Merry Christmas to you my dear! Enjoy these days with family, friends and loved ones. May the upcoming year be a good one for you! Take care,
San
It totally made my morning to see that you are actually going to do a sequel to this story. How wonderful it is not just us, your faithful reader but you the author as well who feels like picking up on the tension between your OC and Haldir sounds like a good idea. ;) That bratty elf just cannot be ignored, can't he? *grins* I am just so very curious to see what you have in store for those two and what part they are all going to play in your follow up story.
Let me just tell you I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story from day one. It was intelligent, well written, had a good plot, took things to a different level but without loosing sight of the original concept of ME, had a good, mature and likable OC and last but not least it was sensual and sexy as sin. *g* One can tell that you clearly enjoy writing for writing's sake, because you simply enjoy doing so. And you certainly got the hang of it. ;) So whatever it is that you are sooo doing right... please continue.
*Sitting under the mistletoe and waiting for the sequel*
Merry Christmas to you my dear! Enjoy these days with family, friends and loved ones. May the upcoming year be a good one for you! Take care,
San
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am still totally in love with your story and cannot wait to see what more you have in store, particularly regarding Haldir! Keep up the great work!
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just KNOW Annowe isn't going to do anything with Haldir, is she? Ohhhh, I like it!
Great chapter. Update soon. I'm really anxious to see how this 'love triangle' *giggles*
will unfold.
Great job,
Michelle...
Great chapter. Update soon. I'm really anxious to see how this 'love triangle' *giggles*
will unfold.
Great job,
Michelle...
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with this story and it just seems to be getting better and better with every chapter! The sexual tension that is increasing is just wonderful and exciting. I cannot wait to see what you are going to do with Haldir, but I hope it will be incredibly... HOT! ;)
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haldir, a 'peeping Tom'..who knew? LMAO!!! Loved the chapter...very hotttt!
Keep updating :D
Michelle...
Keep updating :D
Michelle...
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH NOO!!! Talk about bad timing! Great chapter, full of sexual tension...I loved it! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen.
Michelle....
Michelle....
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What is Haldir up to??????!!! No, no, no...he can't ruin it for them, they've just gotten together...gahhhh!!!! Update soon!
Michelle...
Michelle...
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I'm really enjoying this story - it's a very sweet tale. I enjoy sexual tension in stories...this one has of of that, as well as, a great storyline and astiastic characterizations. Keep up the goork, rk, update soon...I'm completely in love with this story!
I'm really enjoying this story - it's a very sweet tale. I enjoy sexual tension in stories...this one has of of that, as well as, a great storyline and astiastic characterizations. Keep up the goork, rk, update soon...I'm completely in love with this story!