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for City of London

by MerenwenFefalas

person Lily Valentriea
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...it is sweet and dirty at the samee...e...and i really love that you updated...thank you so much ^_^
person Aulmiri
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! *squee* This is sooo great! Update super soon k? YAY! ^-^
person Instert Name Here
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Please update soon! Thankies.
person deathskiss
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gulp*

Just read the 'secret' chapter, and all I can say is....THANK YOU! :) Can't waor tor the next installment!
person Nessa
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fucking hell :D You know I love this... mua ha ha. Are you trying to keel me woman???
person MEEEEEEEEEEEE
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is soooo great and I've never read anything with this plot before, very creative! WAY TO GO! YAY!
Please update soon!
person deathskiss
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeak* Love this! Can't wait to read more. :)
person Ashley
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No...but they can't...FIX IT NOW DAMN YOU!!!!!!
*ahem* Sorry. So anyways, this chapter was really interesting, although I feel bad for poor Elijah. The way Orlando's acting, he doesn't seem
to care much either way (though I suppose it could be an act...I guess I'll find out eventually one way or another), but 'Lij seems to really care
about this, and I hope things work out for his sake. So who put the note in his locker? Was it Dom? It'd be interesting if it was...
Once again, I'll stop with thedom dom guess and whining and let you write.
Keep up the great work ^_^
person Ashley
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I have to say, I passed over this story at least twice before I finally decided to read it, and I'm really glad I got around to it ^_^
I tend to stick to Orlando/Viggo or Elijah/Dom pairings, and Orlando/Elijah has never really floated my boat, but this story is one of those rare gems that is so interesting that the pairing doesn't seem to really matter. In fact, I almost wonder why you bothered to make this an RPS, although it's excellent, and I can certainly appreciate the intrest in seeing some of our favourite boys together. It just would have worked so well as an original. But then I probably wouldn't have discovered it, so I guess it's a good thing it's RPS...I'll shut up now.
Anyways, I'm really curious to learn more about the Orlando/Dom situation, and to see Elijah and Orlando's relationship progress further.
Keep up the great work!
person deathblooms217
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story...when i first read the summary i thought..oh here we go...i didn't think you would be able to pull it off...but this was great. i love it. please update really s!!!
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