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for A Prince's Desire

by nimeme

person Malõ¨al
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it's me again. After reading the review I just posted, I found this previous entry by "Anon". I guess finding that review answered some of my questions. You thought that was me, I'm guessing? No, dear, I can assure you that wasn't me. I've been in New York over the weekend and I literally just got back like a couple of hours ago. That's why I haven't been able to review in the last few days. *hugs you* You probably thought I was a selfish cow didn't you? I don't who the reviewer was, but I promise you, I didn't leave it.

Friends?

Btw, Anon, if you ever read this, thanks for making me look like a bitch. Real classy.

Cheers!
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lies and deceit can blacken the heart. I strongly advise against such a thing. A simple courtesy for another can go a long way. Think about it. If this review doesn't make sense to you, don't even bother thinking about it for another minute.
person nithien ishtar
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Meow lol. Don't hurt Legolas! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase? can't he and haldir just be friends? so that legsie can be happy with 'Dan
person Sian
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Do, I Do!
But I do not like this Elrohir! What a snake! Elladan is going to rescue Legolas-Right? Please! I feel for Leggy, caught between the faint hope of happiness and his ties to Mirkwood.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please with pretty elves on top? ^_^ Don't hurt legsie he should be happy with 'Dan
person Buttercup
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Legolas... so sad. Thank goodness he has Elladan :o)
person Minuial
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. . . . . that was heartbreaking. Poor Legolas, on the verge of fading. :( Thank the Valar for Elladan.

Speaking of Elladan. . . . .I like the way you've portrayed his character. He seems very opnd und understanding. I'm glad Legolas has found him. A lot of girls have always seemed to favor Elrohir, but I'm one of those who's always had a weak spot for Elladan. Thank you for making him such a good character in this fic.

So, I wonder if Haldir is weakening at all to the pince's charms? Dunno, guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.

Btw, glad you're on a roll. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Cheers

Minuial
person Malï¨al
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Though I have a question. When Legolas had that kind of memory flashback of his fathertingting him, did that really happen or it ait a dream he'd had or something? I kind of got the impression that it had really happened. My goodness, Thranduil is a real bitch of a father isn't he? In the story I am writing about Legolas, I've described Thranduil as a good father. It takes guts to make a well-known character hated, so for that, I bow down befoou. ou. :) Well done mate.

As a sidenote, though, I think the battle sequence was a little unclear and I had to go back and read it a couple times before I understood what had happened, hehe. It's no big deal, really, but maybe explain more exactly what the battle entails next time. But you're doing really well, so don't stress, mate. :)

Also, I'd like to thank you for being such a good updater. I check everyday to see if you've updated, and I always get a little thrill when I see that you've added a chapter. Some writers usually take at least a month to update, and that always sucks.

Yeah, yeah I'm talking a lot, but can I ask you a favor? Could you maybe check out my story that I've written and tell me what you think? It's called Golden One: Story of a Prince in the LotR book section (it's not in the male/male section). It'd be great if I could get a fellow writer's opinion.

Anyway, keep writing and I'll keep reviewingove ove ya!

Minuial
person Minuial
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor wittle Legolas. . . I just feel like running up and giving him a hug. I really hope that he finds some kind of solace and peace in Rivendel
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I must say one thing for Legolas, he sure has a strong will. If "I" had one of the sexy Peredhil twins making advances on me, I doubt I would be able to say now. Hehe. Elladan seems like such a nice and understanding elf, I'm glad Legolas has found a friend who doesn't immediately want to "bed" him. . . .or does he? I don't know, I'll just wait and find out when you update next.

Can't wait four nur next update! I look forward to the contact and *ahem* chemistry between Haldir and our beloved prince. Cheers!

Minuial
person Minuial
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack, Haldir's mean! How could he throw poor Leggy? Still, I find his cold, hard demeanor somewhat. . . . sexy.

And the Twins! Gah! I love the twins! My favorite stories always include the twins! Sounds like Elladan is a very decent fellow and Elrohir is a very *ahem* forward one.

Anyway, keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing!

Btw, I'm adding you to my favs list. ;)

Minuial