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WooHoo! I am loving your story. I sat down and read the whole thing (so far) for the first time tonight
and I can hardly wait for another chapter to appear. Lovely plot twist on the horizon I see.
*can't wait*

*pout* How can you stop there?! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update very soon. I do hope Elladan will see whats happening really.

Oh.My.God. I both hate you and love you for that cliffhanger... PLEASE update soon! I'm gonna start ripping my own hair off if you don't write what happens sooooon! Gee. You have really caught my attention! Keep up the great work! love / Mitzie

Just as he was to open the door, “Goodbye, Elladan.”

Elrohir laughed, “Excuse me?”

Haldir realized his mistake immediately and looked at the twin again, “I apologize, Elladan!” He covered his mouth in shock. “Elrohir, Elrohir!”

“Get out of here,” Haldir didn’t need to be told twice and left the room in a hurry. He slammed the door behind him and exhaled in relief.

“Keep away! Do you hear me?” the dark elf wielded a sword and smashed it against his hip, sending Haldir to the floor.

The marchwarden looked up at his assailant, gripping his side in pain. The dark elf stood proudly above him and wore a stern countenance. He was dressed in a robe of highest honors reserved for the rulers of Imaldris. Only three existed and only three elves owned them: deep blue velvet with ribbing comprised of the finest golden thread and draped numerous times over the shoulders. The gold emitted an amber aura around the wearer, something that could be noticed to be revered.

“Know your place, marchwarden,” the ethereal elf resounded, his voice warm but harsh in its intentions.

“Dreadfully sorry, Master Elrohir,” Haldir again covered his mouth as if the words could be retrieved.

“Know your vocabulary as well,” he sheathed his sword and left.
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That made absolutel sen sense to me. Perhaps I've missed something?

I just found this story and I LOVE it! Please keep updating and I will continue to read. Do not doubt that!

Your story is so good, but you're selling yourself short with you're summary. I almost didn't read it... and that would be a horrible. It was so depressing, i felt like crying... but i didn't. As always i hope for a happy ending. So keep going and i'll keep reading to find out which road you go down. As i said before really, really good, but if you write in 'sms talk' people start to think that your whole story is like that and they miss out on such a good read, and you miss out on their reviews (or should I say praise).

WOW!!!!
WONDERFUL!!!I totally loved it. Please keep writing this is a really good story and I want to read more. Just please keeping writing!!!

very good

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louise

That was great!But really sad, about his dad I mean.

Hello! I haven't been ato rto read your fic in a couple of days because I've been away on a long weekend trip. And sadly, my brother doesn't have internet access......grrr, hehe.

I got home a couple of hours ago and I just updated my fic. I got your review, and thank you. I can certainly understand a hectic schedule. I've got one myself. I'm starting my second year of college this fall and I'm ready to pull my hair out, hehe. There was some content in your review that I didn't understand though. What did you mean by your "heart was blackening" and my "fears and concerns"? I can assure you, I never wrote an aberrant review to you. If one of my reviews offended you, I'm really sorry.

Anywho, I was excited to find a few new chapters to read. I'm really liking the relationship between Elladan and Legolas. Though, I've got to say, Elrohir is a cunning little creep, isn't he? Are he and Haldir supposed to be something of an item? Dunno, I'll have to wait and find out.

Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Cheers.