rate_review Reviews

This is poignant, and sweet. I'm notallyally a real-person fic kind of girl, but I enjoyed this a lot-probably because of the lack of graphic sex! It plays on the chemistry that we see on screen between Viggo and Orlando very well without crossing the line into smut. One little word about apostrophes-be careful how you use them as a wrongly placed one or two do distract the reader's eye from your flowing narrative, so it could be worth double checking them, but in terms of content, a lovely, romantic and rshinshing read.
Best wishes
Fay