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for Late Night Love: Jealous Hearts

by kirameki

person Twhtê¨ht
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Feel so sorry for Haldir. It's hard to love someone who doesn't care for you. Also hard not to feel jealous. Curious if Legolas hasn't had to deal with other jealous, disappointed or possessive lovers in the past? Was he upfront with others about his interest just being a fling for fun and nothing more? Would seem that he would have hurt or disappointed quite a few in his seduction of certain bed mates. Of course, others would have pursued him for the opportunity.
person bernsteinnixe
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I feel so sorry for Haldir. I hope things will turne out well for him in the end, and for everyone else. Keep up the good work =)
person Talia
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a nice surprise I found when I arrived back home from my vacation! I hope Rumil/Haldir won't cause something that can't be fixed. (Soul's getting hungy. *hint hint*)
person Crookis
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You said you wanted names for Legolas' brothers , I don't know his his is "Woody" enough but Cenedril means mirror in sindarin.
person Scooter
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the series very cute. Very angsty. Jealous Haldir is cute Haldir. Cute Haldir makes me happy! Keep writing, and if Haldir DOES cause any trouble, I have a .45 and a shovel and can make it llikelike an accident. LOL
person erobey
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah, so haldir and legolas had a one night stand and haldir lost his heart! well, he wll not be ready to give up so easily, especially to the much older scholarly erestor, i'll bet! oh he could do all sorts of things to try and break them up and make erestor seem unfit for legolas, and of course he could tell erestor all about legolas' penchant for bed-hopping! poor rumil! he will really be stuck!

i don't mind the short chapters, i enjoy them and appreciate them! keep them coming!
cheers,
erobey
person sivan325
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That should be very intresting, I wonder how Haldir is going to take it. Well done!

I still love what I read, thank you.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan
person bernsteinnixe
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don't know what I was thinking, but I was under the impression that Haldir was Erestor's old lover, not Legolas'. LOnywanyways, keep up the excellent work and write longer tersters! But not if it means you'd update less often ;-)
person bernsteinnixe
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I get the feeling Rumil likes Legolas as more than just a friend. And poor Erestor!
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't beieve I missed reviewing a chapter! **smack, smack** I did read chapter 2, and I loved it, as usual.

Poor Erestor...feeling left out and insecure, no doubt. I like your Rumil, and your twins' hearts are probably in the right place, bhey hey sure give Legolas a hard time, don't they? As though they could do anything else... **snicker**

Looking forward to more Haldir...but not *too* nasty, I hope!

Min ;)