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for Late Night Love: Jealous Hearts

by kirameki

person sivan325
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was intresting... more is welcome asl swl sweetie.

I still love what I read, and very enjoyed.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan
person HHS
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haldir must have loved Legolas to feel such pain and jealousy over Erestor being Legolas lover.
person bernsteinnixe
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Drunk Legolas was cute, I liked it. You're doing a very good job describing Haldir's feelings. Not sure how I'll feel about that later, but for now I pity him the most...
So the next chapter will be up in 5 minutes, right? lol Love this fic.
person friendly
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do realize that Galthoniel is female name, do you? It is also uncomfortably alike to Gilthoniel, one of Varda's titles. Better not use it.
person nuwing
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I got to read two chapters in one day...I guess there is a benefit to going on vacation! **grin** You're right- I do still feel sorry for Haldir...poor elf, unable to let go...sniff. I would be happy to lend a hand or two! **snicker**

Loved drunk Legolas, too. There's just something cute and cuddly about the idea of a pleasantly sloshed elf, hmm?

My name votes, for what they're worth...Erinthond, Dinath, and Caranmegil, though I fear the last one is because of Sebastian's 'Carandol', an elf I am crazy about! **grin** Tirion is actually my favorite...I used a form of the name (Tiriadon) for 'Las' captain in 'Princes'.

Lovely chapter...keep going!

**hugs**
Min ;)
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor elves! I actually feel kind of sorry for Haldir, but I suppose that won't last, since you said he was going to do some 'stupid and hurtful' stuff!

Nice dinner scene...and very in-character twins! **snicker** Erestor is surrounded by troublemakers of one kind or another, isn't he? **grin**

Great chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one!

Min ;)
person Crookis
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Names i like;

Dínfalas= “Silent Shore”
Calthoniel= “Light Kin”
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Thaliontur= “Strong Power”
Tirion= “Watcher”
Raenion= “To wander”

person Talia
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No Haldir, don't go! It's one of those stories where I just want to step in and DO something. Like cling on to Haldir for dear life while wailing for him to stop. ;) There's this thing that's been nipping me since the end of the chapter. I think it's . =(. =(

Moremoremoremoremore. =)
person Sivan
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...

I hope Legolas will not be hurt so deeply, as Erestor already feels the jealousy...

Haldir is entered and will cause the demage between two lovers... poor Legolas...

I still love what I read, thank you.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic, and don't stop until it finished.

Sivan
person erobey
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, lovely chapter! my, my legolas is a wanton little thing! hehe! and oh how he tormented poor errestor at dinner! i feel bad for haldir, too. he deserves someone to love too. now i have to wait for the confrontation between the three of them! that should be great! thoroughly enjoyed this, can't wait for more!