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for Late Night Love: Jealous Hearts

by kirameki

person Talia
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of all the damage that I imagined Haldir could cause, I never imagined THIS. Genius move you made to make him take Erestor's prized stone. =T I can't wait to see how things play out now, how Legolas will react... ^^
person trustingfriendship
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so wrong; Haldir is in so much trouble when Legolas finds out; look forward to more:-)
person erobey
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, haldir! erestor is going to be so furious and i think he might have to demonstrate that a first age elf can still be a handful when all riled up! legolas is going to be outraged too! i am sure he has thought of haldir as a friend. this is a great story!
cheers,
erobey
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh! Haldir seems to be winding up for a big nasty attack! Poor Erestor...he's so insecure anyway, such an experience will probably set him back a year or two... *n** n**

Nice chapter...and I won't comment on the length, since you already did! **shakes ** ** **snicker**

**hugs**
Min ;)
person bernstein_ò¨ x
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, short is better than nothing =) I'm wondering how you're gonna introduce the pairings you have listed for this chapter... hope to find out soon =)
person Twilight
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a bold and not good move by Haldir to steal the blue stone pendant from Erestor. It seems more poor judgments and actions due to his jealousy will probably happen in the story. By the end, he will probably feel quite shameful about them.
person sivan325
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please...

Short indeed, but I need more.

I still love what I read, thank you.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic, and you do it very well.

Sivan
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh this was both sad and sweet. haldir is just putting himself through such torment! but it was so wonderful for erestor to take care of legolas and tuck him in! now, haldir heard legolas profess his love and erestor reply the same. won't he just let them be? well of course i know he won't but. . .

looking forward to more!
cheers,
erobey
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oops, forgot to vote on the name. i like Lanthirion= “Waterfall”.
person Talia
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Erestor. =( I hope Legolas makes it up to him soon. ;) Oi Haldir, what are we going to do with you? -.-;;

Pleasant, light-hearted installment. I enjoyed it! *always waiting for more* =}