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for Golden One: Story of a Prince

by forlove

person Brin
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story and I wonder who could be watching the dear prince?
Now I've been generous; so please post another chapter or two ... nice long
chapters and soon. In other words, more please!
person Sheeijan
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, intriguing. I wonder who the mysterious watcher was? Perhaps they have a guest that Legolasunawunaware of? And I wonder if his parents knows not to expect any grandchildren from him?

Interesting story, I'll be watching for more. Thanks for writing!
person Sian
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Moving beginning. You captured the Elvish spirit wonderfully. I like this Legolas and am looking forward to much more foru...u...
person Sawen
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful start to what will hopefully be a long story. I hope to read more soon.
person angelbird
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice start. can't wait to read more. please continue soon.
person Kimaera
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's really a sweet and nice start. Keep it up! I can't wait to read more!!!!