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person CathyAPA
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's really hard for me to choose a favorite story of yours. This one has to rank at or near the top. From the very beginning, I was impressed in the set up and structure of this story. Juxtaposing the various elements with the technical aspects for cutting/poloshing a diamond is pure genius. You are able to blend romance and the steamiest smut together to awesome effect. You have rapidly become one of my favorite authors. I hope to read more and more of your stories in the future.
person Liz
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!! Saying that this story was hot would be an understatement! If Frodo had just read this story, there would have been no need for the trek to Mt. Doom. The ring would have simply melted in his pocket!

The writing was top notch and the dialog was fantastic. I loved the way you set this story up, brought it full circle, then ended it perfectly.

I look forward to seeing more of your writings posted here. If you have more already up, please point me in the right direction.

*Now I must cool down*
T/S
person Rainien
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your Chain Lightning stories. It's actually difficult to pick a favorite because they all have their aspects that make them unique from the others in the series.

I think I read somewhere that there will be more stories in this series. I was just wondering if there will be one featuring Billy as the "dominant" partner. LOL Not that I'm complaining. I love Sean as that strong, commanding partner. So sexy. But, reading this story, (especially with this most recent chapter) I suddenly got this picture in my mind of the outwardly strong Sean desperately needing to be taken care of.

You most certainly have a way with words. Keep it up. I'll be looking for more.