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for Darkest Before Dawn

by Blossomwitch

person ki Tki Tachibana
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
weee! good chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Yeah AFF.net has been really annoying with it's constant down times, not that i'm blaming anyone, but it does make it hard to read ones favorite stuffs :D

Anyway i checked out your website where you're putting your stories now, looks fine to me, a suggestion though. You might want to think about linking putting links to each chapter under the title in the fanfiction page, it makes it easier for people to tell if a stories been updated. I hope that made sense...
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i can not wait for the next chapter
person louise_oblique
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good. i do hope you continue

huggs
louise
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you are going to move this fic to your own website (and I don't blame you for feeling frustrated), then please have pity on us and change the background and font colors. White font on navy really isn't pleasant to try to read.

A few glitches in this chapter re continuity and wording, but otherwise good.
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please new chapter poor legolas is the baby gimli's? if it will be what a nice surprise for him please writet cht chapter soon
person Tanesa
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your s! I! I have only recently read it, but love it nonetheless. Your Gimli and Legolas are both very well written, especially Legolas in his distraught condition, and the hint of his pregnancy is something i did not expect, maybe I did not see the warnings, but I am looking forward to more, much more. Including some Elf-love with Gimli, eventually, as Legolas probably does not want much with him too soon. But Gimli is coming to the rescue!
Tanesa
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry with the next chapter please GIMLI hurry *sob*:(
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written. Makes me feel very sorry for Legolas! And pregnant! You said it was mpreg, but I didn't expect it so soon!
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Legolas' POV - well written. Sad, but utterly believable.
person Aurora
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
evil evil woman. i love it!! hehe gotta love a pregnant legolas, and the situation jmakemakes it better. keep writing and updating A.S.A.P!!!