rate_review Reviews

I was on the verge of tears. Poor Orli! I hate that woman, how dares she to ask him for money and all that? Thank the valar Viggo is going to help him. For a second or maybe more than 10 I tought that Viggo was going to hit Orli and that scared me, and then he pushes him and doesn't offer a hand but he cries instead that was very... how can i say it? real. I really like this story and I can't wait to read the next part... I wonder what Viggo is going to do with that thing, I mean woman. It would be great for them to keep the baby but if that woman was asking for money to abort, i can only imagine how much more shé's going to ask for to have the baby and then give it to them.

I hope you update soon :)

*brain working* .... OH! I understaaaand!!! uh... this is going to be angsty (Squeeee!) Poor Viggo finding out that way... and poor Orli! going trhough it alone *huggs for all! (except the girl :P)* hmm i think that was weird, but it is 4 am, so i wish it doesn´t look that weird later.

I´m confused... It feels like you already said the reason of Orli being all upset but I missed it or you are being mean and giving small hints that I´m unable to cathc or that I just got confused... Who is that girl? I want to know ... and what about the retching??? god i´m confused...

But despite all my "confuseness" I liked it. I liked what you said about the beauty in pain, that was good. I´m looking forward to see what happens next in a last attempt to understand what did I miss. So, please update! :D

Ur confusing me, but i like the story...please update again soon

Woooow that was... WOOOOW! You are not letting Orli be all happy now, are you? I hope yre nre not *evil laughing* Update soon, will ya?