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for Carandol the Novice

by Sebastian

person Lioncourt
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY! Where did the updates go to??
person MGC
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is all some elaborate mistake, isn't it? Of course if it is and Legolas then finds that Carandol has gone off with Haldir then he's sure to get the wrong idea. Then we have v.v.angry Legolas heading off to Lorien...that sounds like fun!
person MGC
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, Haldir! And arrogant-as-all-mordor Haldir to boot. Carandol, you're not going to have an easy time of it...
person AzureDragoness
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, I can die happy now.

Oh, and NIIIIIIIICE.
person MGC
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate to break this to you Carandol, but he's IN LOVE WITH YOU. So he's probably going to want you to do some odd things . . .like not sleep with his sister/friends/father/brothers/servants/etc. Will this go well? Hmm....

person Minuial Nuwing
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Okay, I admit it...I already reveiwed this on the OEAM list. I couldn't help reading it again here, and once more, I laughed myself silly. Between panting spells, that is...

I had tears in my eyes over your orc names. Crapbung? Snotpik?
**helpless laughter of Min, who has a distinctly strange sense of humor**

I adore your Legolas- he is so often the pursued party, and it's nice to see him in a different light! Carandol is one of the best OC's I have ever read- he is funny, bizzarely sexy, and **consistently** in character. Amazing! :)

Truly entertaining fic!

Minuial ;)
person Bruce
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now, now, what have we here… the classic „damsell in distress“-approach… very nice, very nice. I like that.
Combined with the “cliff-hanger”-approach… a classic as well.
But I don’t like it. Not at all. I would even be so franc to say I hate it. You naughty, naughty author… And if you do not update in… let’s say 24 hours, I will find myself constraint to take steps that I, being a civilised person, don’t usually fall back on to make you.
I could beg you. Or kneel down and pray in the general direction of your home country (UK?)? Send you flowers? Or chocolate? Orlando Bloom with a red ribbon around his belly?
PLEASE!!!!!!!!
person Anais
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
argh! UPDATE!!!!!!!
Poor Carandol! Really, I find the way the cadets are trained sadly lacking in organization to avoid these kind of situations - and I think Carandol agrees!
Anais
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my goodness! Poor Carandol...I hope Legolas (or a reasonable substitute!) arrives in time. Decidedly darker, but very funny, as usual. Wicked place to end this chapter, though! (VBG)

Minuial ;)
person AzureDragoness
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...... the first rape scene I've ever read where I was torn between feeling afraid for the victim and laughing. Mostly laughing, though. Please, in the name of all that is good in the world, update again soon!