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for Fire and Shadows

by Casualis

person emma
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well thats taken a while to update
person BookOfNicodemus
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More. More, damn you. Infect me with this, will you, this desire? And then deny me the remedy? Lies. Heal me with another chapter, luv. Don't let me die like this, drowning in honey and arsenic, suffocating in the smell of crushed flowers and trodden dead things.

Please, please, write more. You're sick of it, no doubt, being urged inexorably onward down a path you cannot predict. However, in face of your talent with words and weaving story, I can only join the ranks of desperate souls clinging to your feet and dragging you back here to finish what you've started.

Erestor is the shiz. More of him, yay. Glorfindel... rat-bastard Glorfindel, here... oddly enough, I love him. I'm so pleased that you've graced my favorite couple with your earnest and gracious favor.
person twopoint
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is stunning, beautiful and so unexpected. I can't wait to read more. As an Erestor/Glorfindel fanatic, there's very little new writing that truly catches my attention with this pairing but you've managed to open up new lands and visions. More please . . . and soon!
person Sian
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is wonderful. Your writing is incrediable! I am on pins and needles waiting to find out what happened between them. Update soon!
person Sheeijan
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well gee, I'm not so sure I want Erestor and Glorfindel together any more. Talk about cold... I'm completely muddled on what could have possibly happened to so thoroughly ruin their relationship like that, but it must have been a real doozey. I am still feeling very sympathetic to Erestor, but at least he has a good friend in Elrond.
person Sheeijan
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing start. I'm terrified that this is going to be a sad ending with Erestor/Glorfindel, and they are my favorite couple. I can handle angst (aren't we all angst maniacs?), but I need my happy ending. I liked your description of Erestor - he sounds beautiful. The thing about his feeling cold, I'm wondering if he's fading? Or am I reading too much into it? Anyway, I hope you write more soon, this sounds like this could be the start of a wonderfully angsty fic.
person Teri
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My heart is breaking for Erestor. I can't figure out why Glorfindel would ever leave him. Please continue this story and very very soon.

Take Care,
Teri
person Analia
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...

That is a chillingly good start off for your story. I am on pins and needles with wanting to know what happens next. Please update soon.

-Analia