rate_review Reviews

This story is wonderful Eresse. I love your characterisation of Elladan. So strong, so predatory, but noble.
Imrahil too, his physical appearance and his trepidation and awakening. I am so looking forward to updates. I like this as much as G&I if not more.

Chapter 5
I think even the name Ithilien is lovely. I love to think of Legolas as Prince of Eryn Lasgalen, Lord of Ithilien. It sounds musical.
It is nice to see that it is healing for Imrahil to be there among those lovely, serene, sparkling elves. It must speak to the elven blood in him.
I liked your comment, mute but not noiseless. Good one.
So Imrahil got more than he had bargained for. Rooted to the spot and unable to move. Number one I can see why and number two yeah sure. Lucky Dog.
Red as a hobbit in a barrel of ale. Another great one.
So Elladan prefers his meat plain and simple and lots of it. Snorfle
An echo?
Poor Imrahil. He has been bested and soon to be had. I hope. giggle

Chapter 6
Of course Imrahil's having a good time. The twins are fun elves and if you are with one of them you will have fun.
Will the prince's hearing about Legolas and Elrohir help Elladan's cause? I did like his comment about the prince's being skilled with his sword.
Roving eyes. I always have read about rogues being brought to their knees by love and never straying once they find one who they can totally blend with. Imrahil seems to be another one of those.
AAAH Imrahil. How I envy you your glimpses of the array of a Peredhil's revealing poses. I also enjoyed the description of the differences of their bodies. For scientific purposes only of course.
I can certainly see why the prince had such an intense reaction to the still damp, half clothed Elladan. Oh my yes.
We now have Imrahil nin. Elladan and his little smile and his even bigger plans. The prince is toast. giggle

Oh, my goodness! That was certainly ample reward for sleeping on the ground! (VBG) I simply love this story. I have adored your Elladan since the first chapter, and I really like the way Imrahil's character is developing. An incredible read, as always...

Minuial ;)

Hehe score: Elladan 1 and Imrahil 0 *bg*

Keep the chapters coming, cause I quite like this tale :)

I've read the first three chapteo fao far. I will probably read the rest eventually, but, to be honest, I usually shy away from Elf/Mortal parings since how could they possibly end happily? Even if Imrahil has Elven ancestry he will eventually die. Plus I got used to Elladan being with Niemethel(I know I spelled her name wrong -_-;) in your stories. It's funny, I don't usually like OCs either. You write characters in such a way I can't help but like them it seems. ^_^ It is no less engaging in plot or quality as G&I. It's only habit that's kept me away this long. I really enjoyed the Legolas/Elrohir innuendos though. heeheehee. Elladan staying with the Dwarf. Even if only in jest it was quite an amusing scene. XD Please write more. ^_^ I love how you write Legolas and the twins. Especially when you make them blush. XD

lol poor Imrahil, he doesn't stand a chance.
mmm a week of camping? Many interesting things can happen *evil grin*

Elladan is so sneaky...whatever will Imrahil do? (VBG) Loved this chapter, and I have fallen in love with your Elladan as well. This is a truly wonderful piece. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Phew! I think I deserve some sort of reward just for getting to this point in the review process - it took me 10 minutes before I was able to get the en ten to load. *shakes head* Whatever. So Eresse, I think it's safe to say that Elladan has some sort of plans that don't just involve communing with nature! LOL Imrahil so doesn't realize what he's up against, which I've been thinking is a large part of the reason why I'm enjoying this stor muc much. Goodness I thought Imrahil would have a stroke over Legolas & Elrohir's little display - *what* an introduction to Elven duality! On a more serious note, I'm glad being with the Elves is helping Imrahil get over his grief. He really *is* more Elvish that he himself realizes. It will be, er interesting? to see what happens when he and Elladan *do* finally get it on! And I haven't said it in a while, but you really are quite evil leaving us all hanging at the ef chf chapter 5. However, IF you come back and update again soon I might be persuaded to change that assessment...or I could beg, whatever works!

Marie :-)

That is a nice little trap for our dear Prince Imrahil! And a pretty good idea to get him out of Emyn Arnen and Eryn Gael! It will be useful for him to be alone with Elladan *is grinning broadly* What a wicked plan! This will be entertaining ...

I like tnew new story and await eagerly each update - I'm looking every day for it!