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for Twilight Tales - Hallowed Fate

by MPB

person Neea
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most beautiful chapters you have ever written.
person inwitari
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im so rivited.. I totally want him to go with Elladan... because the family is big and they have each other.. and they would have to be parted anyway when Imrahil dies... even if its only for a little while... I am in love with this story.. and i will be happy with any decision.. but i will i still say... Elladan and Imrahil together forever.. he he he
person Lada
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't help but wonder why Imrahil still didn't reveal his marrige with Elladan to his children. May be If he will talk to his sons and tell them that he has a spouse and not alone anymoroughough lono, to, they will give him an advice. I think they will understand Imrahil's desire and may be will insist that he will make a choice in favor of love (love to Elladan). I can't think if Imrahil would choose to stay, how he will able to live happy with his family. Definitely he will fade or something like this due to his elven heritage. I don't know why it takes so hard to decide if their love is true. Anyway, if he will choose to go with Elladan I hope he will do it quick and will not miss Elladan's departure or Cirdan's ship.
Or is Imrahil able to join Legolas and Celeborn's party to depart with? And why Elladan and Elrohir have to sail soon, but Legolas not? And for more amusment How Legolas and Celeborn will sail to Valinor if Cirdan's will depart before them, who will build the ship? I hope Eresse will answer on these questions for I am puzzled.
person Sian
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eresse, how heartbreakingly sad that was and so beautful at the same time. I'm waiting with batted breath for Imrahil's decision, please let there be a happy ending!
Wonderfuapteapter!
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oh...please, please...I can't stand it! If Imrahil doesn't go, I'll explode- Yucky mental picture, hmm? **grin**

This is one of the most beautifully agonizing chapters yet, with Imrahil's musings, and Elladan's hidden pain...I think I may cry myself! Absolutely lovely... inuiinuial ;)
person Anita
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Sorry that I don't review much any more, but the last few weeks have been very busy (graduated from my Bachelor study *bg*)...I could just sneak in enough time to actually read your wonderfull story! And wonderfull it still is :) I try to check every evening now to see if there are any updates.
You know, this whole thing with Imrahil and his Choice took me by surprise. So you once again managed to give the plot a twist!
Keep writting :)

Anita
person elle
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, what in interesting development! I never saw that coming. :P I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Mia
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say I am a bit confused... he loves Elladan so much, why is the choice so hard?
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oh, oh, oh...I am utterly bereft of words.

Even though I hoped he would be permitted to go with Elladan, I pictured it as a gift, not a choice....AAAAAAAARGH!

Please post the next part quickly...and I am counting on your love of happy endings, here, Eresse! ***pleading grin***

Minuial ;)
person Lada
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the best way for Imrahil to choose immortality and sail with Elladan to Valinor. Because if he will not, someday Imrahil will die in Arda even with children, grandchildren and great grand children around him (they love him so much but just as family does). And may be Imrahil will live another 80 years but it would be for him like to become a widow for the second time in his life. Elladan will be alive but so far from him and they will never be together and both of them will grive. But if Imrahil will choose to go with Elladan, even he will leave his family which will happen anyway he still will enjoy his love and spouse close to him. This is my silly opinion and I hope that Imrahil will sail with his spouse Elladan and will have an eternity of happyness and love!:-)
Thank you, Eresse. And I have a request (if I may:-), don't, please, end the story so suddenly with their departure, please, write a chapter about Imrahil's arrival to Valinor and his impression and may be a little about their life together there (If of couse you will make Imrahil to choose immortality which I hope with all my heart).