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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Eresse--
I enjoyed your story very much. Got to Chapter Ten this morning, and then the site went down! Very frustrating. I'm usually chary of Imrahil stories because I write a lot about him myself, and it's hard to get past my own vision of the character. But your Imrahil was sufficiently different that I could appreciate the story. The solution you gave to the problem of Mithrellas and her descendents was well reasoned, I think, and I rather like the idea of the Elven blood cropping up more strongly in some members of the family than others. Elladan was a good choice of mate for him, and the pitfalls of the relationship were well-depicted. The smutty parts were also well-rendered... always a plus! If I have any quibble at all, it's that when Imrahil was contemplating his choice, you said a lot about him being parted from his children for eternity, but nothing at all about poor Aerin. She had featured heavily in his thoughts in the earlier part of the story, but towards the end is not mentioned seperately from the children. Other than that, a very enjoyable story. Thank you.
I enjoyed your story very much. Got to Chapter Ten this morning, and then the site went down! Very frustrating. I'm usually chary of Imrahil stories because I write a lot about him myself, and it's hard to get past my own vision of the character. But your Imrahil was sufficiently different that I could appreciate the story. The solution you gave to the problem of Mithrellas and her descendents was well reasoned, I think, and I rather like the idea of the Elven blood cropping up more strongly in some members of the family than others. Elladan was a good choice of mate for him, and the pitfalls of the relationship were well-depicted. The smutty parts were also well-rendered... always a plus! If I have any quibble at all, it's that when Imrahil was contemplating his choice, you said a lot about him being parted from his children for eternity, but nothing at all about poor Aerin. She had featured heavily in his thoughts in the earlier part of the story, but towards the end is not mentioned seperately from the children. Other than that, a very enjoyable story. Thank you.
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as usual, simply brilliant. Your characterisation is very detailed, very realistic and very compelling. you really have a gift for writing! Ever consider yourself as a professional author? You're definitely good enough! I am eagerly waiting on the stories you have hinted at and implore you to poste them quickly before i expire from the waiting! To conclude@ yet another astonishing and bifulifuly crafted piece of work! :)
Your loyal fan,
Asha
Your loyal fan,
Asha
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I like much everything what you write.
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely bloody brilliant.
I LOVE your stories - they are exceptional and by far the best LOTR fics I have EVER read - and I've read HUNDREDS! LOL!
I cannot WAIT for more of your brilliant work!
Thank you for bringing me many laughs and smiles and nbitibiting and tear-jerking moments!
Wonderful stuff! As always!
*Ella*
I LOVE your stories - they are exceptional and by far the best LOTR fics I have EVER read - and I've read HUNDREDS! LOL!
I cannot WAIT for more of your brilliant work!
Thank you for bringing me many laughs and smiles and nbitibiting and tear-jerking moments!
Wonderful stuff! As always!
*Ella*
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GUH!! This has been....just like G&I...I swear!! On your feet, heart clenching, throat closing, tears coming, other things coming...hehe. MAN!! Oh, this was good!! I can't wait for more!! You are an inspiration and a bane...keeping us other authors on our toes. SHEESH!! Love, DA
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely lovely lovely *sigh* Fantastic ending... and we even got to know a bit of what happened to Imrahil's wonderful beloved children. What a beautiful story, Eresse. And I'm so thrilled to read there will be MORE!!! ^_^
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer! Everything you have written is just wonderous- great imagery, dialogue, oh man. I'm a fan! I will read anything you out out! Thanks so much for continuing after Greenlead and Imladris!
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again I bow to your adroit skill and passion with words. Now tell me if you hwritwritten any published books on any topic and where the hell I can get them!!!
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant and heartwarming story! Even more romantic than Aragorn and Arwen's! I am soooo looking forward to your next stories which I hope would have daily updates. :) Thanks again for sharing your writings. Am also excited about the prequel of Hallowed Fate with my favoriteolasolas and Elrohir!!!
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely lovely! Such a wonderfull story :) I will be waiting for the sequel of course!