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for To Finally Belong

by Sinda

person Michelle
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Cira! She really put him in his place! Ha ha...he didn't get any, hahahaha!
Loved the chapter, please update soon...
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!! Haldir gets his comuppance!!!!! GOOD GIRL CIRA! That smart ass elf deserves everything she can give him and more!
person Wanderer
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I'm saying this about an Urk and an Elf, but---AWWWWWW HOW SWEET! And it's a damn good thing Haldir is beginning to bring his high and mighty attitude down a notch. Cira would have done it for him, otherwise, lol.

Wonderful chapter!
person carly
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you buttmonkey! you had to end it right there didn't you! grr! want more!
person Wanderer
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like....whoa. That was incredible. All that emotion, brimming just under the surface. Especially the end. I am impressed, I a I applaud.

person Wanderer
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a highly intriguing concept...one I don't recall coming across before. You have a very solid start to your story, and I can't wait to see where this leads. Update often, please:)
person Piper\'stwin21
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning!! I can't wait for the next update. This was a perfect beginning and i hope you update soon!