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for To Finally Belong

by Sinda

person AnnaB
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story , very well written and thought out . The sexual tension was electric !!! Keep up the good work !
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, even though it is quite an obvious Mary-Sue.
person Wanderer
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was So behind! I got sick, and looking at the compy screen made me dizzy:( But I'm all caught up now, and OMG I feel like I just went through an emotional wringer with these last few chapters! First we're up, then we're down, then we're up, then we're down, then we're WAY UP!

You do good things for my mental image of Haldir. Verra, Verra good things. Now, excuse me whilst I go get a towel to clean up my chair.
person sesshouchick
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 was amazing your writing one hell of a story I love it please update soon becuz I check for new chaps everyday. Thanx a faithful reader.
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yep! He's got it bad! It seem that elves are rather over protective of their mates. hehehe I like Haldir like this.
person Wanderer
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Crap, all crap.....................*wrestles keyboard from evil twin*..........................sorry about that...evil twin pops up ever so often and screws with my favorite authoresses...Wonderful chapter...the story is moving along nicely...I could see this ending real soon, or taking off in a new direction and lasting for quite a while.....it'll be interesting to see which way you choose:)

person Nora
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting pairing at the beginning. I especially like your character, Cira. It's about time somebody took our cocky
Marchwarden down a few notches. Thanks.
person Menelui
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More updates please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Idril
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
By the Balance Eternal! This is hilarious, how much longer are you going to be torturing the guy guy like that? ::snickering softly:: Then again, having Cira knock him even further off his high horse would be amusing, she'd definitly be the dom in the relationship most of the time eh?...hehe More please!! Lemon!!!!!
person Wanderer
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil....E V I L *sigh* cliffie. rude. but yummy:)